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Cavern Creations

Deep cave under falls.
Stalactite rhythm echoes
From eons of drips.


Inspired by Raul's Rhythm of the Falls

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Brandee Augustus

October 27, 2009 at 1:20 PM

I like how you decided to describe what was behind the water and made that just as important as the falls itself. Congratulations on your placement in the contest!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

October 24, 2009 at 7:34 PM

Dear Martin, Congratulations on YOUR placing in Raul's Contest It is like you looked through the picture Superb entry Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 23, 2009 at 4:35 AM

Congratulations, Martin, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this very excellent haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Sue Mason

October 19, 2009 at 5:25 PM

Good luck in the contest, Martin! Love the "eons of drips" ... smile ...

Audrey Haick

October 18, 2009 at 9:25 PM

Congratulations, Martin!! Great imagery!! Peace, Audrey

Ismael Nieves

October 18, 2009 at 9:18 PM

Powerful lyrics you printed there, Martin. FELICITATIONS! on your win.

Barbara Gorelick

October 18, 2009 at 11:28 AM

Good for you! A win right out of the box. Well done Marty! BG

Brian Strand

October 17, 2009 at 2:27 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest Martin.Rgds Brian

Elaine George

October 16, 2009 at 7:59 PM

Dear Martin, Congratulation on your beautiful Haiku win. Love, lainie

Doris Culverhouse

October 16, 2009 at 7:30 PM

nicely penned, congrats on the win!!

Robin L. Gass

October 16, 2009 at 5:16 PM

Congratulations on your WIN in Rauls contest with this wonderful Haiku, Marty! Love, Robin

Trudy Diane Rider

October 16, 2009 at 3:38 PM

Congratulations Martin! ~Trudy~

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 16, 2009 at 3:37 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Martin. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

October 16, 2009 at 2:37 PM

Martin, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

October 10, 2009 at 6:38 PM

good, good, I like it!!

Carolyn Devonshire

October 9, 2009 at 7:37 PM

Raul's contest has inspired some amazing writes and this is an outstanding entry for the competition. Indeed, it takes "eons of drips" for the stalactites to form. There are caves in North Florida where they explain the history of the stalactite formations. You describe them beautifully! Love, Carolyn

Abe Lopez

October 9, 2009 at 5:33 PM

i love the way you chose to see beyond the image....very nice Martin!

Charmaine Chircop

October 9, 2009 at 3:55 PM

a winner..indeed--Charma

John Weber

October 9, 2009 at 9:25 AM

Excellent Haiku, Martin, with a pacing reminicent of those drips creating the mineral deposits. Good luck on Raul's contest! Warm regards, John.

P Sheart

October 9, 2009 at 7:37 AM

Hi Marty Great visual here. Very well written Haiku! Smile, truly enjoyed. Makes me ponder upon those eons of drips, love the ending. Thanks for sharing and for your most welcome comments. Have a wonderful inspiring weekend my friend. Love Light Truth Patricia

Gert W. Knop

October 9, 2009 at 5:17 AM

Al the best for the contest, Marty! Many years ago I visited the cave at Postojna, Slowenija, it was very impressive. Very well written Haiku and thank you for commentin Melting years.....Gert