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Cavern Creations

Deep cave under falls. Stalactite rhythm echoes From eons of drips. Inspired by Raul's Rhythm of the Falls

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Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/27/2009 1:20:00 PM

I like how you decided to describe what was behind the water and made that just as important as the falls itself. Congratulations on your placement in the contest!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/24/2009 7:34:00 PM

Dear Martin, Congratulations on YOUR placing in Raul's Contest It is like you looked through the picture Superb entry Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 4:35:00 AM

Congratulations, Martin, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this very excellent haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Sue Mason

Date: 10/19/2009 5:25:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, Martin! Love the "eons of drips" ... smile ...

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/18/2009 9:25:00 PM

Congratulations, Martin!! Great imagery!! Peace, Audrey

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/18/2009 9:18:00 PM

Powerful lyrics you printed there, Martin. FELICITATIONS! on your win.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/18/2009 11:28:00 AM

Good for you! A win right out of the box. Well done Marty! BG

Brian Strand

Date: 10/17/2009 2:27:00 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest Martin.Rgds Brian

Elaine George

Date: 10/16/2009 7:59:00 PM

Dear Martin, Congratulation on your beautiful Haiku win. Love, lainie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/16/2009 7:30:00 PM

nicely penned, congrats on the win!!

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/16/2009 5:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your WIN in Rauls contest with this wonderful Haiku, Marty! Love, Robin

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/16/2009 3:38:00 PM

Congratulations Martin! ~Trudy~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/16/2009 3:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Martin. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/16/2009 2:37:00 PM

Martin, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/10/2009 6:38:00 PM

good, good, I like it!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/9/2009 7:37:00 PM

Raul's contest has inspired some amazing writes and this is an outstanding entry for the competition. Indeed, it takes "eons of drips" for the stalactites to form. There are caves in North Florida where they explain the history of the stalactite formations. You describe them beautifully! Love, Carolyn

Abe Lopez

Date: 10/9/2009 5:33:00 PM

i love the way you chose to see beyond the image....very nice Martin!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/9/2009 3:55:00 PM

a winner..indeed--Charma

John Weber

Date: 10/9/2009 9:25:00 AM

Excellent Haiku, Martin, with a pacing reminicent of those drips creating the mineral deposits. Good luck on Raul's contest! Warm regards, John.

P Sheart

Date: 10/9/2009 7:37:00 AM

Hi Marty Great visual here. Very well written Haiku! Smile, truly enjoyed. Makes me ponder upon those eons of drips, love the ending. Thanks for sharing and for your most welcome comments. Have a wonderful inspiring weekend my friend. Love Light Truth Patricia

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/9/2009 5:17:00 AM

Al the best for the contest, Marty! Many years ago I visited the cave at Postojna, Slowenija, it was very impressive. Very well written Haiku and thank you for commentin Melting years.....Gert

Date: 10/8/2009 4:27:00 PM

Nice multi-sense imagery in this poem. I really like the interesting perspective in the last line. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2009 4:08:00 PM

Good luck in the contest. Nicely done Haiku. Different approach to the wording. Keep writing. Sara