Caution Mr Joe

Mr. Joe's tongue bloomed as beautiful flowers
Petals falling down as crystal drops of rain
Went to the apple land to follow the shadow as bride's future
Left the morose marks from the woods where he came from

Hence, he looks luxury, brings the mother tongue of universe
Changes vastly the posture from head to foot 
Life flies to the solar-flare, everyone wants to stare
Can't count the lines even see the melancholy eon...

Crown of a king touches on his head
Hands with seeds with diamonds sleep under his blessed fate
Waiting for the right clock to point its arms to raise the chin   
For those hit his snoopy and woke up his hazardous soul

Swallows everything's weak inside and boosts the anxiety
Mornings can't paid the uncountable mourning 
That blew the dandelion in the air called the faith
For every hour sweet line on his face conveys into ash

The deepest sigh is preserved by decades
Pushing himself to jail the race that symbols of his herd
For such reasons just to embrace the statue of liberty 
Less proud to yell up own peers to the blue and green eyes

Indeed, the magical ability inherited to the forefathers
Big lie carried the bridge to burn his fellows to be known
The trash on your mind is the one you left behind
The striking flag yet today crawling 

And brave spirit obtain to be known
Not as the house of poor servants 
But as the creatures with faith
For the abandoned country of majestic workers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/27/2013 3:10:00 PM
Just came across the name of this Elai, so thought i would have a read; I think it a good write and enjoyed my time here..'
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Date: 6/29/2013 3:07:00 PM
You've carved it well Elai. I enjoyed reading it this evening. Very thought provoking and well expressed. Well done. AO
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Date: 6/28/2013 10:28:00 AM
Thanks for the comments...appreciate!
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:52:00 PM
Wow classical a lil abstract. Admire d line about solar flares most. Kudos!
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Date: 6/25/2013 6:42:00 PM
There are many layers of thought and emotion within this piece. Very well thought out and emotionally relevant.
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Date: 6/25/2013 7:09:00 AM
Excelent. Deep thoughts. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 6/25/2013 8:46:00 AM
thanks Ravi... it makes me to be flattered.
Date: 6/24/2013 12:31:00 AM
Lovely!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/23/2013 9:08:00 PM
Elai, thank you for sharing the story. and the comment on my poem.... luv~ Linda
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Date: 6/23/2013 2:40:00 PM
such depth, i share your words.. very well penned, elai...:) huggs
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Date: 6/25/2013 8:45:00 AM
thanks for the visit Nette! appreciate it so much!
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