Caught In the Rhymes

The detective stood at the scene of the crime
 Gathering clues at the base of a wall
 Bits of eggshell were strewn all around
 Where Mr. Dumpty "fell" off the wall

 The week before there was another crime too
 That victim was found in the early morn
 The victim's name, Little Boy Blue
 Found in a field of corn

 Little Jack Horner went into hiding
 He was fearful and distraught
 He thought he would be next,
 A couple weeks later he received a text
 Telling him the killer was caught 

 So he turned on the TV to see the news
 And then he saw the face of the accused
 He was shocked to see that
 the killer was none other than Jack Sprat!
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  6-30-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Congratulations! This was imaginative, adventuresome, and fun!
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Did I get the right one? Jack sprat could eat no fat?
May Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 10:57 PM
Yes, that's him..lol
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Oh, the one that would eat no fat! This was very clever, JOseph. I sure love seeing how people did these in so many different ways. Congrats for your win.
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 10:32 PM
Back with congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Congratulations on your win. Ours is similar. Such a fun write. I just couldn't kill off Humpty!! Excellent!
Canerdy Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Delightful, Joseph. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
Y. Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Hi Joseph, You have cracked the case and the mystery was solved. Your imagination and creativity shined in this piece. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Ajmal Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:07 AM
Seeing the name of Jack Sprat even shocked me, gladly Jack horner survived but its Humpty who died, many congratulations on your 1st position in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
May Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Thank you for my top placement Faraz
Sands Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 2:48 PM
A nice creatively written detective story Joseph ! Well done :)
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 8:05 AM
- Wonderful humorous writing, Joseph :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 9:08 AM
now i can say you can be a great scriptwriter as well... love the execution of the plot, joseph.. huggs
Man Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 5:32 PM
Joseph, this is both humorous and creative. A fun write to love!
Roper Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 10:26 AM
Love the poem, who would have thought fairy tales have turned violent. hahaha... Good luck in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Enjoyed reading this humorous and detective story..very well delivered, Joseph..best for a top win.
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