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Caught In Charlotte's Web - Nursery Rhyme

VIDEO/AUDIO on YouTube above. NOTE: On the video; double-click to enlarge, and/or, right-click for the drop-down menu and click on 'Loop' for auto-repeat, click settings and pick the highest level for quality viewing. Caught In Charlotte's Web - Nursery Rhyme Wilbur's piggy neighbor had noted his favor and anger had started to stir, But Wilbur uses words so I'll sing like the birds but his hums sound more like a slur, So sad was Cadbury who was no canary no singer talents that there were, So mad he had noted a tune had not floated so crazed he became a monster. This fairy-tale means, Do not teach a pig to sing, because it cannot sing, and it annoys the pig. 2021 March 10 *1st Place* Nursery Rhyme ~~Eve Roper Judged 2021 March 11

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/12/2021 6:32:00 AM

Congrats on this wonderful rhyme. Love and God bless you, Gina

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/12/2021 2:14:00 PM

Thank you, Gina, blessings to you and yours, Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2021 3:02:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, William :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/12/2021 2:13:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, for your kind remarks, Aloha!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/12/2021 2:51:00 AM

Creative winner. Congrats. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/12/2021 2:12:00 PM

Thank you, Sara, Aloha!

Carol Mitra

Date: 3/11/2021 4:54:00 PM

Haha....it reminded me of the Pink Floyd song...Pigs on a wing....Pigs cant sing too :) Congrats William on your win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/11/2021 5:55:00 PM

Part and departed but true be the hearts..., sweet, Carol, thank you much, Aloha!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/11/2021 2:29:00 PM

William, great nursery rhyme with rhythm and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/11/2021 3:34:00 PM

I enjoyed creating this spirited muse, Eve, and I'm truly indebted to your kindness, Aloha

Jan Allison

Date: 3/11/2021 2:20:00 PM

Oh how I loved the story when i as younger and your poem is super, love that ending too:-) hugs Jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/11/2021 3:30:00 PM

Agree that 'tis memorable and grateful for your sharing, Jan, Aloha!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/11/2021 1:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this amusing nursery rhyme William. Well done ~ Belle

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/11/2021 1:56:00 PM

Thank you, Belle, your words are greatly appreciated my friend, Aloha!

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/11/2021 1:11:00 PM

Hi William, You did a great job retelling the classic tale. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved.Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/11/2021 1:53:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis, for your generous extended courtesies my friend, Aloha!