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Caught In a Nightmare

CAUGHT IN A NIGHTMARE Go out for a good time, when caught in a nightmare. Gun shots, hysteria, around you …every where. This is world’s new normal, tho not supposed to be. This in America, home of the brave … and free. Free all right free of peace, from Eden far removed, Everyone thinks they’re right, see what this … has proved. “Far as depends on you be peaceable,” been taught. * I’m neutral; Peace Maker, will you do … as you ought? Barbara Barry-Nishanian July 13, 2022 copyright All rights reserved * KJ- Romans 12:18 -“as far as It depends on you, be peaceable with all men”

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Date: 9/22/2022 10:55:00 AM
Yes! It seems that big egos rule the day. Divided at war with one another instead of working together to solve the problems. Wonderful write here, dear Barbara. Thank you for sharing.
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 9/25/2022 11:02:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for your kind words. Being neutral in world affairs is not popular. But Bible say's, "be no part of the world." Thanks again, so much for visiting. I'm gonna go visit you my friend.
Date: 8/13/2022 2:36:00 PM
We are so far removed from Eden my friend, I am always praying that most of us become more aware of our roll in the world and do better, its getting worse and we are getting more cautious, that is not the way God intended it for us, thank you for your awareness and your caring poem, Much love, Vie
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Date: 8/14/2022 8:08:00 AM
Vie, 2Tim. 3:16 describes our last days, as if reading news report. You are so right, God did not. intend us to live this way. Prophecy is being fulfilled right before our eyes. He will soon step in as Ps 37, mentions and destroy the wicked. Reply
Date: 8/7/2022 3:15:00 AM
Hi Barbara...you mention below, your style, love it! as thoughts arrive, you disperse to rhythmic ink...often employed meself...stanza 3 my fave, perfect...I do carry a pepper spray in my glove box, as carjackings are up over 100% in my town, tho, honestly, if I would be of calm enough mind to operate under stress, questionable! good poem! james
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 8/14/2022 8:04:00 AM
James, glad you liked the thought, "what has thinking we are right proved' A scripture I recall says, "Man can't direct his own steps." .So how other folks? Thanks so much for commenting. Stay safe
Date: 7/17/2022 6:57:00 AM
An amazing writing, Barbara. Excellent rhythm and rhyme. These days, peace is harder and harder to come by. I appreciate you taking the time to comment on my page.
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Date: 7/17/2022 2:28:00 PM
Thank you for mentioning rhythm and rhyme, Why? Because I have no idea of aabbcc etc. So can never enter contest, when require this kine of stuff. Just write from heart and seat of my britches.
Date: 7/15/2022 7:02:00 AM
An excellent write my dear friend, Barbara. Great flow of rhyme. Peace now a days is becoming elusive. Still dreaming to visit america someday. Thank you so much for sharing your stunning poem/precious gem. Congratulations too for being a member of this special group of poets. For me, you are one of the assets here. I'll follow you if you don't mind. Blessings. Hugs
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Date: 7/13/2022 6:40:00 PM
Peace did not do the Romans much good, either! Aloha!
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 7/14/2022 4:55:00 PM
Thanks so much for introducing yourself to me. Went and visited your site. This is how we meet fellow poets, by commenting. Stay safe.
Date: 7/12/2022 10:32:00 PM
Peace- nowadays, is out of reach!- Well and woe, happy and sorrow, peace and unpeace- in the hand of activities~ let all be the realistic helpful positive hands
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Date: 7/13/2022 8:55:00 PM
Mahtab, thanks for visiting me so quickly. Imagine a world where everyone did their best to be peaceful with everyone. Has to start with us, hope you agree.

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