Cats Breath Upon Toast

cat’s breath upon toast — her lips moist with cockcrow warmth and vigor of dew 4/17/2019

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/18/2019 5:17:00 PM

This is so like a cat; they want to smell everything; food, pills, vitamins, you name it; if it goes into a human mouth; they're right there. There should be more cats trained to sniff out illegal drugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2019 5:25:00 PM

LOL!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/18/2019 12:28:00 PM

Wow. What a profusion of sensory imagery in three short lines. Bravo, Kim! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2019 3:49:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/18/2019 10:39:00 AM

Kim this is vivid - great write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2019 3:49:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer! Hugs...Kim

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/17/2019 8:23:00 PM

Great haiku my friend. Mom so loved her cats. Me I am a dog person more so than cat. But I did have as a pet a big tomcat when I was ten years old.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2019 8:25:00 PM

Thanks! Enjoyed your memories! <3 Kim

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/17/2019 10:01:00 AM

Kim.. Take a look at the picture. You need another one! You can find one. Can you take a picture of your cat and Post that? I have a calico. She wants to smell test anything I eat! Enjoyed the poem Panagiota

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2019 11:46:00 AM

I don’t have a cat. The idea came from a pic I saw.