Viv Wigley Poet Free verse

Cathedral- Visual 1

Stand and bathe in blue diamond light
light painting the marble glory
glory by man's hand is praising
praising He who freely gives light


For the "Four Lines Only" Poetry Contest of nette onclaud
Based on visual number 1

Viv Wigley 8th June 2015

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Julia Ward July 28, 2015 at 1:17 AM You're welcome. It's a lovely photo you've put here, Viv.

Julia Ward July 28, 2015 at 12:59 AM I like it, but you need to change "he" to "He" to show you mean God, not man. Viv Wigley July 28, 2015 at 1:09 AM Good point, Julia, I'll amend it. I kept looking at it over and over and wasn't fully happy with the poem, and it showed by not being placed. I've left it here to remind me. Nice of you to blow the dust off. Viv x

Peter Lewis Holmes June 15, 2015 at 8:21 PM Nice smooth write Viv....Peter Viv Wigley June 15, 2015 at 11:29 PM make it work, even. damn keyboard :) Viv Wigley June 15, 2015 at 11:28 PM Thanks, Peter, tricky to it work. Best wishes, Viv

Paul Callus June 10, 2015 at 9:43 AM Clever take on this visual, Viv! You give light to these smooth flowing lines. I see a winner here! // paul Paul Callus June 16, 2015 at 4:34 PM :) the Maltese 'thank you' is appreciated:) Viv Wigley June 10, 2015 at 12:00 PM Grazzi, Paul. A tricky form to flow well, but I think I managed to sort of turn it full circle. Regards, Viv

Judy Konos June 8, 2015 at 9:58 PM I just stopped to swellerer wellerer you that this is good...very Viv Wigley June 8, 2015 at 11:15 PM I appreciate your comments, Judy, and consequently I am of a thankerary disposition toward you. May your day today be more gooderer than yesterday. Viv x

Barbara Gorelick June 8, 2015 at 6:05 PM Just lovely! It will do well. BG Viv Wigley June 8, 2015 at 11:11 PM Thanks, Barbara, very kind. Love 'n hugs, Viv x

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2015 at 3:26 PM I love how you did your theme around light!! Very fitting for the picture and best of luck in the contest. Viv Wigley June 8, 2015 at 11:09 PM Thanks, Andrea. A tricky form, and the wrap over of words I find make it difficult to get a flow. Your entry managed it effortlessly. I must practise more. Viv x

Casarah Nance June 8, 2015 at 6:56 AM Praising he who freely gives light-oh I love how you shine with this four line write! :) hugsxx Viv Wigley June 8, 2015 at 8:00 AM Thanks, Casarah, lovely to hear from you, I hope you are more wellerer than a really well person. Yes, folks, today's word is wellerer. Viv x

Jan Allison June 8, 2015 at 1:57 AM You captured the image perfectly with this spiritual write - I hope this will do really well for you in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx Jan Allison June 8, 2015 at 6:20 AM I REALLY like this one Mr Viv:-) Hugs Jan x Viv Wigley June 8, 2015 at 6:17 AM Thanks, Jan, you too. Viv x