Catharsis: the Love Mantra

Ah, ‘Love’! a lover’s repeated mantra!
I see me mutter it, just now, very now.
Sigh I high, a busy, burning furnace,
scrolling lines with aching, grieving woes;
she, a charmed worm, wriggles, snorts,
while floating on a fluffy, velvety cloud.

Is this repeated mantra pricier like a jewel: 
a sapphire, a diamond, pregnant with 
quintuplets? I know she never touched,
- she grieves! -  a sapphire or a diamond.
Even necklaces howl at her golden neck —    
It’s only a dream: a fluffy, airy dream,
A snorting, never wakening, dream.

When I say, “Love”, LUST - in me 
SMILES: luscious, vicious, LUST  —
that stays like a cat-snake, light-red, 
cool inside “Love”, coiled - hiding —
its head in mid of his slithering body,  
and approaches its prey - the victim 
of love – STRAIGHT! - straight at night. 

Jealousy, the quintuplet brother of Lust, 
chuckles on hearing my mantra, "Love",  
“There exists a hairy thinness between 
Love and Me. We’re quintuplets”. 
On my face, jealousy reads sky-rising
Flames in Troy and in an ivory pearl, 

And I see Theseus puffing a mount  
of flames at Hippolytus
and Love drowning in rising flames — 
and other two quintuplet brothers moving,
blindfolded, round and round the dazzling pyre. 


*A 3rd Place* in the following contest (Judged on Jan. 5, 2021)

Jan. 4, 2020 (originally posted on Dec. 2, 2020)
Your best free verse 2020 Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: John Hamilton 

* A 2nd Place* in the following contest (judged on Dec. 10, 2020)

Dec. 2, 2020
Catharsis Poetry Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: Silent One 


Inspiration from my own poem, “Jealousy” (published in 2018)

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Date: 1/25/2021 12:29:00 AM
beautiful the mantra of love;
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 1/25/2021 4:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mahtab, for this impressively great comment!!
Date: 1/6/2021 1:29:00 PM
Newton, incredible!! This is truth through captivating art. How I admire your insight, your strength with expression that is somehow so delicate in its touch. I am deeply in receipt of your universal message. Poetry in top form here with Catharsis. Congratulations, a deserved high Win. I am looking forward to reading :Jealousy'. Thank you for your beautiful inspiration.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 1/7/2021 5:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sigrid, for this impressively great comment, congrats and the complement!!
Date: 1/5/2021 6:57:00 PM
A very interesting write Newton, congrats on a fine shared win!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 1/6/2021 5:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, John, for the congrats and the placement!!
Date: 12/12/2020 6:35:00 AM
Great poem Newton! Congratulations on your win!!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/12/2020 6:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mark, for the great comment and the congratulations!!
Date: 12/11/2020 2:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/11/2020 4:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this sweet comment!!
Date: 12/10/2020 8:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I like the presentation of the idea in the poem. Wish you the best of health and long life...
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/11/2020 4:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Loving Kindness, for this great comment!!
Date: 12/10/2020 7:37:00 PM
“When I say, “Love”, LUST - in me SMILES” :) ~ “There exists a hairy thinness between Love and Me” so well expressed! Congrats on your win!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/11/2020 4:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Unseeking Seeker, for this impressively great comment!!
Date: 12/10/2020 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/11/2020 4:50:00 AM
Thank you for the comment!!
Date: 12/5/2020 8:44:00 PM
WOW! Cleverly done. Kept on wanting to read more. Awesome job, Newton, and best wishes in the contest :)
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Date: 12/5/2020 8:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Akkina, for this wonderfully lovely comment and the complement!!
Date: 12/5/2020 7:42:00 AM
Interesting work. Jealousy is always when a person feels that their relationship with a person is in danger, always a triangle. Envy is wanting what the other person has. To covet always means wanting what another person has(a very strong desire for it). Living means we have these emotions but we are suppose to work through them somehow but sometimes a person takes it too far. I see it all the time on murder cases on TV.Very expressive descriptive work.. Sara
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/5/2020 8:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara, for your close reading and this impressively lovely comment with excellent details!!
Date: 12/4/2020 5:54:00 PM
I love mantras and the way they make me feel, I love the feel of this poem, greatly enjoyed dear poet. thank you for sharing.
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Date: 12/4/2020 8:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pixie, for this sweet comment!!
Date: 12/3/2020 1:17:00 PM
wow, newton, very well crafted poem with creative images. So original. I like this a lot.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/3/2020 3:03:00 PM
I feel so sweet this lovely comment, Andrea!! I feel so pleased!! Thank you so much!!
Date: 12/2/2020 3:03:00 PM
An emotive surge of words here Newton, in this repeated mantra of yours. Have enjoyed the read... All the best for the contest, Belle
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/2/2020 3:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Belle, for this impressively lovely, sweet comment!!
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