Catharsis: the Love Mantra

Ah, ‘Love’! a lover’s repeated mantra!
I see me mutter it, just now, very now.
Sigh I high, a busy, burning furnace,
scrolling lines with aching, grieving woes;
she, a charmed worm, wriggles, snorts,
while floating on a fluffy, velvety cloud.

Is this repeated mantra pricier like a jewel: 
a sapphire, a diamond, pregnant with 
quintuplets? I know she never touched,
- she grieves! -  a sapphire or a diamond.
Even necklaces howl at her golden neck —    
It’s only a dream: a fluffy, airy dream,
A snorting, never wakening, dream.

When I say, “Love”, LUST - in me 
SMILES: luscious, vicious, LUST  —
that stays like a cat-snake, light-red, 
cool inside “Love”, coiled - hiding —
its head in mid of his slithering body,  
and approaches its prey - the victim 
of love – STRAIGHT! - straight at night. 

Jealousy, the quintuplet brother of Lust, 
chuckles on hearing my mantra, "Love",  
“There exists a hairy thinness between 
Love and Me. We’re quintuplets”. 
On my face, jealousy reads sky-rising
Flames in Troy and in an ivory pearl, 

And I see Theseus puffing a mount  
of flames at Hippolytus
and Love drowning in rising flames — 
and other two quintuplet brothers moving,
blindfolded, round and round the dazzling pyre. 


*A 3rd Place* in the following contest (Judged on Jan. 5, 2021)

Jan. 4, 2020 (originally posted on Dec. 2, 2020)
Your best free verse 2020 Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: John Hamilton 

* A 2nd Place* in the following contest (judged on Dec. 10, 2020)

Dec. 2, 2020
Catharsis Poetry Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: Silent One 


Inspiration from my own poem, “Jealousy” (published in 2018)
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Bangalee Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 12:29 AM
beautiful the mantra of love;
Ranaweera  Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 4:50 AM
Thank you so much, Mahtab, for this impressively great comment!!
Ermine Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Newton, incredible!! This is truth through captivating art. How I admire your insight, your strength with expression that is somehow so delicate in its touch. I am deeply in receipt of your universal message. Poetry in top form here with Catharsis. Congratulations, a deserved high Win. I am looking forward to reading :Jealousy'. Thank you for your beautiful inspiration.
Ranaweera  Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sigrid, for this impressively great comment, congrats and the complement!!
Hamilton Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 6:57 PM
A very interesting write Newton, congrats on a fine shared win!
Ranaweera  Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 5:07 AM
Thank you so much, John, for the congrats and the placement!!
Koplin Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 6:35 AM
Great poem Newton! Congratulations on your win!!
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 6:09 PM
Thank you so much, Mark, for the great comment and the congratulations!!
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 2:54 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 4:49 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this sweet comment!!
Kindness Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 8:13 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I like the presentation of the idea in the poem. Wish you the best of health and long life...
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 4:49 AM
Thank you so much, Loving Kindness, for this great comment!!
Seeker Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 7:37 PM
“When I say, “Love”, LUST - in me SMILES” :) ~ “There exists a hairy thinness between Love and Me” so well expressed! Congrats on your win!
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 4:48 AM
Thank you so much, Unseeking Seeker, for this impressively great comment!!
One Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 4:50 AM
Thank you for the comment!!
Downing  Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 8:44 PM
WOW! Cleverly done. Kept on wanting to read more. Awesome job, Newton, and best wishes in the contest :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 8:55 PM
Thank you so much, Akkina, for this wonderfully lovely comment and the complement!!
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 7:42 AM
Interesting work. Jealousy is always when a person feels that their relationship with a person is in danger, always a triangle. Envy is wanting what the other person has. To covet always means wanting what another person has(a very strong desire for it). Living means we have these emotions but we are suppose to work through them somehow but sometimes a person takes it too far. I see it all the time on murder cases on TV.Very expressive descriptive work.. Sara
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 8:51 AM
Thank you so much, Sara, for your close reading and this impressively lovely comment with excellent details!!
Rose  Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 5:54 PM
I love mantras and the way they make me feel, I love the feel of this poem, greatly enjoyed dear poet. thank you for sharing.
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 8:39 PM
Thank you so much, Pixie, for this sweet comment!!
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 1:17 PM
wow, newton, very well crafted poem with creative images. So original. I like this a lot.
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 3:03 PM
I feel so sweet this lovely comment, Andrea!! I feel so pleased!! Thank you so much!!
Edmonds  Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 3:03 PM
An emotive surge of words here Newton, in this repeated mantra of yours. Have enjoyed the read... All the best for the contest, Belle
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 3:19 PM
Thank you so much, Belle, for this impressively lovely, sweet comment!!
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