Catharsis

the pearly night---
moving into dawn now
catches me
half-awake at the window
breathing in tangy air
and scent of golden leaves
that twirl as quickly as they fall...
 
from the sidewalk
created for prancing around,
a dove whispers from across the lane
gazing back at me
and knowing I will place both feet
on grounded earth,
locking the eroding  door behind me
to  release my cathartic world
of unsolved past hurts:
 
and it's here where love will come
just moments within  my dream
for  I believe this soul is cleansed,

or else there isn't any reason to take a new leap.




Nayda Ivette Negron's Contest Catharsis
6/1/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/25/2017 12:06:00 PM
Greetings, Nette. Congratulations on your big win in Nadya's contest. Your poem is breath-taking! Your images are stunning...they come form the pen of a magical poetess! Have a blessed Sunday. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 6/25/2017 12:10:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem with lovely imagery. Congrats on your win, Nette. A 7 & a fav for sure.
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Date: 6/24/2017 11:19:00 PM
Congrats, this was a beauty! Hugs!
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Date: 6/24/2017 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations Nette for the placement of Catharsis contest.
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Date: 6/4/2017 7:43:00 AM
this is beautiful, Nette
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Date: 6/4/2017 6:10:00 AM
Beautiful to live these lines, Nette, good job:)
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Date: 6/1/2017 7:41:00 PM
You're breathing out beautiful lines of art. That's what it is, miss Nette :) good luck in the contest :) xo
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Date: 6/1/2017 10:49:00 AM
Starting each day with a clean slate is the only way to approach life. Anything else would be futile. Yesterday is gone. Your poem brings a moment of clarity, nette:)
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Date: 6/1/2017 8:37:00 AM
To take a deep breath and give pause for what is released..good luck
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Date: 6/1/2017 7:58:00 AM
Beautiful Nette. Well done with a perfect ending :)
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Date: 6/1/2017 2:46:00 AM
- A new day in beauty ... enjoy it, Nette - Beautifully written as always - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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