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Catharsis

the pearly night--- moving into dawn now catches me half-awake at the window breathing in tangy air and scent of golden leaves that twirl as quickly as they fall... from the sidewalk created for prancing around, a dove whispers from across the lane gazing back at me and knowing I will place both feet on grounded earth, locking the eroding door behind me to release my cathartic world of unsolved past hurts: and it's here where love will come just moments within my dream for I believe this soul is cleansed, or else there isn't any reason to take a new leap. Nayda Ivette Negron's Contest Catharsis 6/1/2017

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Date: 6/25/2017 12:06:00 PM
Greetings, Nette. Congratulations on your big win in Nadya's contest. Your poem is breath-taking! Your images are stunning...they come form the pen of a magical poetess! Have a blessed Sunday. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 6/25/2017 12:10:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem with lovely imagery. Congrats on your win, Nette. A 7 & a fav for sure.
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Date: 6/24/2017 11:19:00 PM
Congrats, this was a beauty! Hugs!
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Date: 6/24/2017 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations Nette for the placement of Catharsis contest.
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Date: 6/4/2017 7:43:00 AM
this is beautiful, Nette
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Date: 6/4/2017 6:10:00 AM
Beautiful to live these lines, Nette, good job:)
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Date: 6/1/2017 7:41:00 PM
You're breathing out beautiful lines of art. That's what it is, miss Nette :) good luck in the contest :) xo
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Date: 6/1/2017 10:49:00 AM
Starting each day with a clean slate is the only way to approach life. Anything else would be futile. Yesterday is gone. Your poem brings a moment of clarity, nette:)
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Date: 6/1/2017 8:37:00 AM
To take a deep breath and give pause for what is released..good luck
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Date: 6/1/2017 7:58:00 AM
Beautiful Nette. Well done with a perfect ending :)
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Date: 6/1/2017 2:46:00 AM
- A new day in beauty ... enjoy it, Nette - Beautifully written as always - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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