Catfucious

I caught a mouse; It's in your house. Fear on four feet.

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Running Wolves

Date: 1/17/2020 1:47:00 PM

oh what a terrible mess we made... even torn down the windows shades... paw prints... mouse prints... claw marks too... the house is a shambles... oh what can we do... merry maids where are you??? bwahahahahaha

Running Wolves
Date: 1/17/2020 2:13:00 PM

bwahahahahaha… hey even the mouse needs a house...tee...hee

Jean Bush
Date: 1/17/2020 1:53:00 PM

Hahahaha! Stop. You're killing me! And get that mouse while you're at it.

Warren Doll

Date: 11/8/2018 9:02:00 AM

Jean, I have 3 fur babies-Buster, Max and Wilbur. I read this out loud and they gave their nod of approval. So do I. You know your felines. Warm wishes~ Warren

Jean Bush
Date: 11/8/2018 9:10:00 AM

Thanks, Warren. I have 2 Maine Coons: Tequila Summer & Honey Bunny, The Hairball from Hell.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/16/2018 2:49:00 PM

Oh that's priceless; that cat's proud of itself...I know you didn't offend it by not dining on mouse...hee! I wouldn't want to either but, loved the short and sweet Haiku.

Jean Bush
Date: 10/16/2018 3:07:00 PM

Thank you! I find mice give me indigestion, I prefer less furry fare.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/30/2018 1:58:00 PM

So much for beating around the Bush! Senryu or Haiku, a charging mouse (or cockroach) creates fear - except to cats which simply adore the excitement! Aloha! Rico

Jean Bush
Date: 8/30/2018 2:00:00 PM

Aloha, Rico. I hate anything that crawls too quickly for me to stomp!

Barry Stebbings

Date: 8/30/2018 1:17:00 PM

I love this one, Jean. It is really a Senryu as Haiku relate to seasons. You might like some of my cat poems. // Barry

Jean Bush
Date: 8/30/2018 1:20:00 PM

Thanks, Barry. I'll look you up. I love cat lovers.