Caterpillars Become Butterflies

They said that she was ugly, fat, and shy.
She went her way to shameful words and sneers.
Ignored or worse by those who passed her by,
She'd weep the dew each night with all her tears.

The caterpillar, few have understood.
In every garden scorned and undesired
Until such time she reaches womanhood.
Then by all men she's suddenly admired.

The dress she wears so colorful and slim.
Her freckled skin now silky, fair, and smooth.
Her every movement, elegant and prim,
But still she bears the cruelness of her youth.

And when she flits so daintily our way
Perhaps that's why she never deems to stay.

9.2.18
Contest 1:  Personification poem of a pet, wild animal or insect (N/A)
Contest 2: Brian Stand contest #490 (N/A)
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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 12:31 AM
Wow Jesse, I am delighted that Luloo gave so many of us a second chance to have our poems that got N/As viewed. I love this little gem with its superb ending! It is going into my Faves my friend! Congratulations on deserving your first placement! : ) xxoo
Mitra Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 6:38 AM
there is hidden beauty in this sonnet...it shows and touches the reader
Rowe Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much. This one went largely unnoticed when I posted it so I am so glad to see you found it and enjoyed it.
Lindley Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 7:45 AM
I truly enjoyed reading this wonderful sonnet my friend. Great verses and fine finish! A fav,,,,
Rowe Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Thank you, Robert.
Wolf Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 9:10 PM
This is wonderfully expressive personification, tastily---yet pointedly---written. Can't understand why it hasn't drawn any comments yet. Excellent! Best wishes, Gershon
Rowe Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Many thanks. Oddly this one had very few views compared to my other poems. I suspect that is because I posted it this weekend when most people were traveling.
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