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Zapped our eyes ears centers not on a beam unless on a ledge teeter-totter in space our eyes want more or less either way satisfies the milquetoast our ears crave hypersonic or a hum matters not his horns levitate left and right halos hooked over them self-righteousness he craves when Christianity behaves dead are men’s spirits around them a buzZ

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Date: 3/25/2025 1:57:00 PM
Hi Kim, First and foremost congratulations on your placement with this towering piece. A highly original, challenging entry infused with vivid imagery and concerned plot. Thanks for your email on my submission Howard
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Date: 3/24/2025 6:38:00 PM
Really forthright, inner wisdom of human nature, Kim- I loved it <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2025 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 3/24/2025 1:28:00 AM
Rest and unconscious ness,a state escape from reality. Nicely penned.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2025 4:49:00 AM
Thank you, Akham

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