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Catching His Eye

A smartly dressed lassie from Philly
Was quite adept at being frilly
She was ever so prim
When hanging around him
Something was special about Billy.


May 14, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

May 15, 2021 at 4:38 PM

Nice limerick my friend.

L Milton Hankins

May 15, 2021 at 4:51 PM

It attracted a bit of attention and Belle wrote a follow-up that was flattering! Thanks for your kind word.

Beryl Edmonds

May 14, 2021 at 3:44 PM

The smart young lassie who fancied Billy - When near him she behaved rather silly - She showed off her jewels - Forgetting mother’s rules - Doing a belly-dance and a shimmy... Belle

Beryl Edmonds

May 14, 2021 at 4:06 PM

Checked syllable count and edited, Belle

L Milton Hankins

May 14, 2021 at 3:52 PM

Nice. You should make sure of your syllable count and submit it. Interesting response.