Catch a Falling Star

I can’t quite recall
The feel of your fingers
In my hand and

The sound of your voice
Escapes me today,
But I’ll remember it.

What was that song we sang?
Solo I can’t quite get the tune.
No one else thinks it’s funny.

You thought putting
a falling star in your pocket
was silly.

But it’s rainy now
and I need one on this
starless night.


©March 28, 2003
Kathryn McL. Collins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 12:13 AM
Wistful and sad... even with the word 'funny' in the text. So well expressed! Love, Keith
Eastman Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 9:00 AM
I find this unique and touching... beyond belief.
O'Leary Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 9:33 AM
Very touching... very nice... Terry
Patrikar Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 8:10 AM
awww...
Patrikar Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 8:10 AM
loved the last stanza
Pettit Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 11:58 PM
A very fanciful and imaginative write. Good going.
Horsman Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 2:44 PM
love the sincerity here,, weonderful well written poem.
Alvez Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 8:28 AM
Beautiful! Love in between each line. Cynthia
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 12:37 PM
Excellent verse. A FAVE for me.
Gorelick Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 11:03 AM
Lot of good lines here..especially like the last one. BG
Poet Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 10:23 AM
Very nice Kathryn.Love this .
Grisetti Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 8:19 AM
I do hope you find a star. A beautiful and touching poem.
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