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Catalyst of Two Faces

The catalyst of two faces, his and hers, bookends with pleasure dais in between. Faithfully compacted on canvas, concurs, never turning ones back, remains clean. Sharp brush of Chagall, floats lovers. Their passion, a cloud in lala land, hovers. Circus performer on ochre horse forbids openness and honesty of their lofty eyelids. Marc’s pallet red and black succinctly paints an inseparable couple, for better; worse, flower-veins glory and pain distinctly shady, married-hair worn romantic with fetters. Poet decides his circus lacks an idyllic affinity . With pain, questions whether to smoke or abstain. A satisfied artist, elongates his masculinity — triad of instruments, hard lines against grain. 11/25/2020

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Date: 11/27/2020 12:27:00 PM
I have a feeling that you were an art appreciation major, Kim. This is not the first time you accidentally let this creep into one of your poems.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2020 1:22:00 PM
Love art! I’v grown in appreciation over the years. Thanks.
Date: 11/25/2020 8:02:00 PM
I feel as if you've given me a birds-eye view of a remarkable Chagall painting, for which I thank you immensely. ~ Easels and Oil Paints, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/26/2020 4:11:00 AM
Thank you! One of my favorite artists.
Date: 11/25/2020 8:48:00 AM
I like how you combine art and marriage... some deep lines here, especially the last stanza... This could have been an entry into my previous juxtaposition contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2020 8:57:00 AM
Oh how I wish! Thank you!
Date: 11/25/2020 8:35:00 AM
Seems like a search for perfection in painting two lovers. At least that's what comes to me. I stand to be corrected. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2020 8:56:00 AM
Thank you!

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