Cataclysm

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Cataclysm: a large-scale and violent event in the natural world.

Creating damages that will cause a hole A powerful bang, pulling down the pole The tree has fallen, no place for the owl A U-turn becomes a continuous roll Causing so much effect to break the bowl Long lasting deviation, making the toll Young soul affected, or of nation’s goal Scarce invertebrates for the hungry mole Major change, devastating to the whole

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Deb Radke

Date: 12/22/2018 1:35:00 PM

This is a very thought-provoking poem. Upon reading it, I went back several times to read it again. It releases it’s truth slowly. Very good, Funom. Best wishes for Christmas and the coming new year. Deb

Funom Makama
Date: 1/4/2019 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so much deb radke