Cat Valentine

If I could be a cat, I wouldn't chase a mouse,
but if you put me out,
perhaps I'd choose to go and search about
for flowers I could snip with small white teeth
to carry home to you inside my mouth.
My mission then complete,
adoringly I'd greet you with a mew
and blooms strewn at your feet.
I think I might like that.

If I could be a cat, I wouldn't want to eat
kitty stews in cans or livered meat.
I think instead I'd use my feline eyes to plead-
entreating you to feed me from your plate,
and then when you  had your fill,
perhaps you'd leave me ice cream
melted and unfinished from your bowl.
I wouldn't hesitate
to lick your fingers clean appreciatively.
Yes, I think I might like that.

If I could be a cat, I wouldn't want to sleep
alone and curled around some ball of yarn.
I'd leap onto your bed instead (I wouldn't make a peep)
and nestle in the cradle of your arm.
And if you reached to stroke my fur,
I'd place my paws upon your chest charmingly
and warmly start to purr.
If I could be a cat, I think I might like that.

(an oldie that I wanted to show again, and I add this little
Valentine Haiku on the bottom just for you, PD):

the trinity of Linda, Irma, and PD. . . . get BIG hugs from ME
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sergi Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 3:23 PM
Hi Andrea: As a cat lover, I was very impressed with your poem although my cat was very aloof except when it was time for his supper. They are smart and cunning animals. Good Write!
Austin Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 10:23 AM
If you were a cat you would be the smartest damn cat in the world, but listen. My cats are very smart and can get me to do some of the things you mention. Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver
Davis Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 5:38 PM
Andrea What a cute and charming write. Puts a smile on the readers face and makes them chuckle. Kitties are warm and cozy that love to cuddle. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Human Contact poem
Brown Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in ~P.D's~ "Any Valentine Poem Will Do" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 2:57 PM
An oldie if it is but a goodie. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 12:18 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Great piece. Nice going. luv Ralph
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 2:14 AM
Congratulations Andrea. pity you are a girl, this is lovely xx
A   Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 9:38 PM
Andrea, congratulations... with your wonderful win in my contest. Thanks for sending out more love this pass valentines. Have yourself a nighty nite. I'm also Sorry for confusing, all my winners. ~Always*PD
Arno Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 6:26 PM
Congratulations Andrea. Great poem! Jon
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 1:00 PM
Andrea, This is a delightful write. I love it. The Haiku is a very nice touch. Your talent is undeniable. Thanks for sharing it. Congrats on winning 1st place in PD's contest................S.Ronthorpe
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 12:02 PM
Andie, what devoted Kitty love conveyed in your delightful winning poem. Love my kitty too. Congrats on your BIG WIN!!!
Bauer Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 10:24 AM
a wonderful poem and so creative! you've really captured "catness" with this write and it's a well-deserved win! congrats! (by the way, the use of "hoe" in my "trample" poem was intentional! glad you caught it!)
Pettit Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 9:58 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Personally, I would always prefer to be a human being over a cat. This is a very imaginative write.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 9:42 AM
oh so sweet Andrea..many congrats for numero uno win luv.. thankxx for loving dedication .. feel the same way ,y friend.. u are the best friend ever..luv..
Scholtz Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 6:37 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem Andrea, love Elizabeth
Williams Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 1:45 AM
Andrea congrats on your win...David
Lefanue Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 1:30 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your win! Great poem! Love, Maureen xx
Austin Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 9:12 AM
My God! I've gone to the end of the list and still can't find one I haven't read, so I'll just comment on this one again. You have captured cat essence so well. These are exactly the things cats do, the way they think (I think) What is "hot mail" and how do I find it. Love, Dave
Poet Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 9:14 AM
Another wonderful creation from your pen!-kashinath
Austin Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 3:03 PM
Wonderful poem. You should come to our house if you want to be a cat, because our cats enjoy all those things you mentioned. One thing, though, you didn't mention licking dinner plates clean. No need for a dish washer. Actually, this is where we draw the line. Love, Dave
Chachere Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 9:10 PM
no i havn't heard of Ravandra.i'll go read though.and im already writing a sequel.its the enigma, and the other attached to it. im not sure when it will end.
Chachere Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 9:08 PM
not all are mysterious, or charming enough to be a cat. but im sure you can in this poem. i love cat eyes, i plan on getting one. and i used past tense on Lenne, because i wanted to confuse the reader, but then i wasn't sure, i don't know now.lol it just seemed like i had to do that.i couldn't imagine my mother belly dancing.haha, i don't think i'd want to see.your kids might be crazed.you know.. -Always&Forever Lynette
Jenkins Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 1:55 PM
TOOOO CUTE
Hilliker Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 10:59 PM
Cute poem. I have 2 cats, and they're great. Sounds like you'd have a great cat life.
Thekidster Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 5:15 PM
If I could be a cat, I too would be like that. Another great write Andrea. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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