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Cat Valentine

If I could be a cat, I wouldn't chase a mouse, but if you put me out, perhaps I'd choose to go and search about for flowers I could snip with small white teeth to carry home to you inside my mouth. My mission then complete, adoringly I'd greet you with a mew and blooms strewn at your feet. I think I might like that. If I could be a cat, I wouldn't want to eat kitty stews in cans or livered meat. I think instead I'd use my feline eyes to plead- entreating you to feed me from your plate, and then when you had your fill, perhaps you'd leave me ice cream melted and unfinished from your bowl. I wouldn't hesitate to lick your fingers clean appreciatively. Yes, I think I might like that. If I could be a cat, I wouldn't want to sleep alone and curled around some ball of yarn. I'd leap onto your bed instead (I wouldn't make a peep) and nestle in the cradle of your arm. And if you reached to stroke my fur, I'd place my paws upon your chest charmingly and warmly start to purr. If I could be a cat, I think I might like that. (an oldie that I wanted to show again, and I add this little Valentine Haiku on the bottom just for you, PD):
the trinity of Linda, Irma, and PD. . . . get BIG hugs from ME

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Date: 6/28/2014 3:23:00 PM
Hi Andrea: As a cat lover, I was very impressed with your poem although my cat was very aloof except when it was time for his supper. They are smart and cunning animals. Good Write!
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Date: 6/23/2014 10:23:00 AM
If you were a cat you would be the smartest damn cat in the world, but listen. My cats are very smart and can get me to do some of the things you mention. Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver
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Date: 12/10/2013 5:38:00 PM
Andrea What a cute and charming write. Puts a smile on the readers face and makes them chuckle. Kitties are warm and cozy that love to cuddle. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Human Contact poem
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Date: 2/20/2012 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in ~P.D's~ "Any Valentine Poem Will Do" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2012 2:57:00 PM
An oldie if it is but a goodie. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/18/2012 12:18:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Great piece. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/18/2012 2:14:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea. pity you are a girl, this is lovely xx
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Date: 2/17/2012 9:38:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations... with your wonderful win in my contest. Thanks for sending out more love this pass valentines. Have yourself a nighty nite. I'm also Sorry for confusing, all my winners. ~Always*PD
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Date: 2/17/2012 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea. Great poem! Jon
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Date: 2/17/2012 1:00:00 PM
Andrea, This is a delightful write. I love it. The Haiku is a very nice touch. Your talent is undeniable. Thanks for sharing it. Congrats on winning 1st place in PD's contest................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/17/2012 12:02:00 PM
Andie, what devoted Kitty love conveyed in your delightful winning poem. Love my kitty too. Congrats on your BIG WIN!!!
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Date: 2/17/2012 10:24:00 AM
a wonderful poem and so creative! you've really captured "catness" with this write and it's a well-deserved win! congrats! (by the way, the use of "hoe" in my "trample" poem was intentional! glad you caught it!)
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Date: 2/17/2012 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Personally, I would always prefer to be a human being over a cat. This is a very imaginative write.
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Date: 2/17/2012 9:42:00 AM
oh so sweet Andrea..many congrats for numero uno win luv.. thankxx for loving dedication .. feel the same way ,y friend.. u are the best friend ever..luv..
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Date: 2/17/2012 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem Andrea, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/17/2012 1:45:00 AM
Andrea congrats on your win...David
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Date: 2/17/2012 1:30:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your win! Great poem! Love, Maureen xx
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:12:00 AM
My God! I've gone to the end of the list and still can't find one I haven't read, so I'll just comment on this one again. You have captured cat essence so well. These are exactly the things cats do, the way they think (I think) What is "hot mail" and how do I find it. Love, Dave
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:14:00 AM
Another wonderful creation from your pen!-kashinath
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Date: 6/29/2010 3:03:00 PM
Wonderful poem. You should come to our house if you want to be a cat, because our cats enjoy all those things you mentioned. One thing, though, you didn't mention licking dinner plates clean. No need for a dish washer. Actually, this is where we draw the line. Love, Dave
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Date: 3/22/2010 9:10:00 PM
no i havn't heard of Ravandra.i'll go read though.and im already writing a sequel.its the enigma, and the other attached to it. im not sure when it will end.
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Date: 3/22/2010 9:08:00 PM
not all are mysterious, or charming enough to be a cat. but im sure you can in this poem. i love cat eyes, i plan on getting one. and i used past tense on Lenne, because i wanted to confuse the reader, but then i wasn't sure, i don't know now.lol it just seemed like i had to do that.i couldn't imagine my mother belly dancing.haha, i don't think i'd want to see.your kids might be crazed.you know.. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:55:00 PM
TOOOO CUTE
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Date: 1/23/2010 10:59:00 PM
Cute poem. I have 2 cats, and they're great. Sounds like you'd have a great cat life.
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Date: 1/23/2010 5:15:00 PM
If I could be a cat, I too would be like that. Another great write Andrea. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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