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Cat Dreams - Mystic

Sleep, my little pet.
With small beast paws tucked underneath your small beast chest,
slumber on, sweet cat, with nothing to arrest your little nap.

So are you telepathic now?
Your sweet beast eyes are opened wide to peer as I lean near
to study your eyes flecked gold with oval slits.
I wonder how you see me.
Am I grey or brown or am I some strange shadowy form?
Or in this well-lit room,
am I as vivid to you as the hue in which I'm viewing you?

Here with me, you have no fear,
but when you dream, perhaps you wander ancient plains of Egypt or of Africa,
and catching sight of me inside your dream,
you flee to go prowling through ghostly reeds
where the howls of predators - jackals, coyotes and wolves - 
echo in the still of night. Then do you creep into a secret place
to awake in the morning to an orb of sun and go running with companions, tumbling in the grass as you play?

Late in the arid heat of afternoon,
do you lay your beastly head on paws,
and dozing the remainder of the day, dream of a distant space
which is very small and where a strange breed looms?
Where among that breed is one who meets your needs
by bringing you food and who grooms your coat and keeps you safe
who sleeps curled up beside you on her bed,
and who sometimes - curiously -
                              watches you as you are sleeping?

Oct. 2, 2017 for the  IMAGE ME A POEM Contest of Mystic Rose
(Picture #3)
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Inman Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 8:35 AM
This is beautifully written Andrea. I love the repeated use of the word beast. It is wonderful the way you have personalized your relationship with your cat.
Arowolo Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 2:49 PM
Wonderful and interesting piece. Good one,Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Barden Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 6:50 AM
Love it, Andrea! Are you my long-lost sister or something? We both chose the same one, lol! We see many things very similarly ... congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-) <3
Lane Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 4:40 PM
Well done and congratulations on your kitty dreams.
La France Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 1:48 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win with this wonderful and beautifully penned poem, I love it !
Roper Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 11:37 AM
Awesome, congratulations on your win!
Gentile Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 9:52 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea
May Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 6:23 AM
Lovely i ages, Andrea! Congrats on your top win!
Sivey Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 5:19 AM
What a magnificent write my friend! You have surely written a winner here! Vie will love this! I think your enlightenment is a quality on its own, such above the bar that is set! I was in awe of this incredible poem this morning! I hope to read more of your delightful poetry soon, Great Work!!
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October 2, 2017 at 7:08 PM
I had a cat for many years and was quite upset when she died. My cat's name was Bilbo. J.R.R. wrote a nice poem about cats. Your poem is evocative especially when you talk about the plain of Egypt and Africa where the ancients wandered. I had a poem in the last Voices Israel newsletter - you might want to send them some of your work. You do not have to be Jewish to write for it. Good luck in the contest.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:58 PM
I enjoyed this very much Andrea. I hope you are having a great day.
May Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Nicely penned Andrea...best wishes
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Quite an imagination in this poem--but the picture as shown can only come together through magic or far reaches of a dream--both are well depicted in your poem--best for a win, Andrea!
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