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The cats deals of charles wysocki

Poetry/Shape/Cat
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1707-757-23-8102
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Originally, Written, August 23, 2018
Submitted to the International Contest, Poetry Comes In All Kinds Of Shape
Sponsor, Vanya Evangeline, Judged 03/05/2025

Sixth Place

"A House is not a home without a cat."

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O I am so sad now that she left for up above. Fourteen years is a long time to love a cat, this sweet. A kitty came that fit my hand all fluffy and purring, she loved to cuddle all the long nights. I held her in my arms till her body was stone. And now I go to the place where I buried my beauty. I told my friends- no, no, more cats for this here girl. They say just give it time! Oh, oh my- days are empty, sometimes, I hear her soft meow call, calling for me, in my home tomb silent. Tears, fall fall fall ing like rain on my new kit ty.

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Date: 3/6/2025 6:45:00 AM
Oh dear, I was sure I would get emotional here. precious write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2025 3:16:00 PM
Thriveni, thank you for the compliment, and congratulations, blessings ~
Date: 3/5/2025 11:43:00 AM
This is cool. Congrats.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2025 3:17:00 PM
Mac, thank you for the compliment and congrats, blessings ~
Date: 3/5/2025 11:31:00 AM
Awwwe... losing a beloved pet is so much harder than people credit. They're family! I too love cats! Your shape is so good and send like it'd be challenging to produce so neatly! A wonderful tribute to your kitty. Xoxo
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Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2025 3:18:00 PM
Crystol, thank you for the comment,and compliment, blessings ~
Date: 3/5/2025 1:58:00 AM
So heartfelt and touching and so well done on the shape too! I hope you are healing dear constance. Take care of yourself! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light always~
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Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2025 3:18:00 PM
Ink, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings ~
Date: 2/21/2025 5:01:00 PM
Nicely shaped Constance. I had a dog for 17 years before we had to euthanize her. I did not want any more pets after that, but I also had two young daughters. We've had a dog, several cats, and various other pets since then and I now have 2 bunnies.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2025 10:30:00 AM
James, thank you for the compliment. I know it is hard to lose a pet, we tend to not want to go thru that pain again. But, for me, I could not resist the urge to save another unwanted kitty, and now I have my precious Bella, blessings ~
Date: 2/20/2025 11:22:00 PM
Great shape and poem. Very touching.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2025 9:57:00 AM
Robert, thank you for the compliment and comment, blessings ~
Date: 2/18/2025 9:30:00 PM
Such a clever shape to hold a sad little story. I’m sure there’s enough love to go round. Remembering the old and embracing the new. Well written Constance..
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2025 9:09:00 PM
Margaret, thank you for the visit and lovely comment, yes, after the heart heals it opens again ~
Date: 2/18/2025 3:00:00 PM
Hello Constance, Hi! You had that cat for a long time. I like the way you created this poem. Your cat Belle will give you lots of love. Friendsip & Love, Darlene/
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Date: 2/20/2025 10:44:00 AM
Hello Constance, I know I will be like you when I get my new cat when I am ready. Friendship & Love, Darlene
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2025 9:10:00 PM
Darlene, thank you for the comment, yes, love is hard to let go of, but I am delighted with my new kitty Bella, she is very special ~
Date: 2/18/2025 1:35:00 PM
How clever are you Constance...a lovely poem in the shape of a cat! Debx
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Date: 2/19/2025 9:11:00 PM
Deb, thank you for the compliment and comment, appreciate ~
Date: 2/18/2025 12:06:00 PM
- You & Bella ... will have many wonderful years together ... a lovely poem ... love the shape :) - hugs
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Date: 2/19/2025 9:12:00 PM
Bella, suits me so much, so is a wonderful cat, she has taken my pain of losing Snuggles away, though I will never forget her, hugs ~
Date: 2/18/2025 9:20:00 AM
Bella is attuned to your sadness, Constance. Animals have more sensitivity that many humans. More is the pity of that, but since she's a rescue, you're helping each other. Shed your tears if it helps you heal. You and Bella need each other. So far, I'm sticking to my thought to never have another kitty or pup.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2025 9:14:00 PM
Lin, thank you so much for the comment, yes, I needed Bella and she needed me, her life had not been very good. But now she is a princess with no worries. I understand how you feel, the pain of losing a pet is so awful ~
Date: 2/18/2025 8:31:00 AM
WOW!!! What a write and shape. I Love This. I know you are very sad. They say, time fixes everything but I have found that Not to be true. I also said, no more. After all the years, I still say no more. "Good Luck" This is a winner for me. Have a very blessed day writing away.................
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Constance La France
Date: 2/18/2025 8:42:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the compliment, comment and encouragement. I said no more after Snuggles passed but, today there is a new kitty named Bella in my home, blessings ~

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