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Casual Sex

A fleeting glance in a crowded room Electricity hurtling through space Drawn like a magnet, carnal lust unleashed Wisdom and sanity scattered to the wind Lost in a hedonistic desire for the unknown Loveless fornication in an unquenchable sea

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/4/2012 12:39:00 PM

o o .. (_) Just trying to be creative - Soup mail for you!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/3/2011 3:26:00 PM

sounds V-E-R-Y dangerous, Lizzie. :) Hope u are not running on fumes! 3 more days to go for me! :) Will correspond with ya soon.

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/3/2011 7:35:00 AM

Mmmm...I definitely appreciate this delicious piece. I will say, though, that what may be sanity scattered to some...it may be sanity embraced to others.

David Williams

Date: 12/1/2011 11:10:00 AM

Lizzie, electric all the way through, sounds like you go to some great parties..David

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/1/2011 6:00:00 AM

Makes my mouth dry when reading this. It must be "unquenchable" if the rest is true. How you disturb me dear Lizzie and I guess that's what great poetry is supposed to do!

Tony Lane

Date: 12/1/2011 5:56:00 AM

It's casual because you don't have to dress for it.

Don Johnson

Date: 12/1/2011 1:22:00 AM

fires do burn become a blaze, fog steams up the summmer haze, deep carnal thoughts simply amaze, ol drought it breaks just sometimes...

Lord R. E. Taylor

Date: 12/1/2011 12:28:00 AM

Who ever says that you don't kn ow the birds and bees is out of his bleeding mind. No one who doesn't want...need sex could ever write this. I love it!

Dan Kearley

Date: 11/30/2011 11:49:00 PM

Wow! Thats all I can say... :o)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2011 10:02:00 PM

wow, you sure gave a powerful description of it, Lizzie! Good one!