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Classy -

Comfortable Combination,

*curves are calling*

curled in casual lace

 

Causing

a collection,

of clever creativity

- to collide and connect

 

~ ~ What a Rush ~ ~

 

Exploring -

to examine

with eager excitement . .

ending with an exclamation ! ! !

 

A

Visual Vocabulary,

*verbs being vocal*

Vigorous and very Voluptuous

 

~ ~ What a Rush ~ ~

 

Poetically -

Placing Paragraphs,

in perfect poise

. . in a Playful Position

 

Imaging,

those Invigorating

soft and silky

Images, you Intentionally Invite

 

 

~ ~ What a Rush ~ ~

 

. . Curled in Casual Lace

 

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A Simple Scribble

Casual Lace

Sweet Sensation of Whispering Words -
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Pickett Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 2:07 PM
This one is very expressive and inviting. It most definitely gives me a rush as i feel like the lace wrapped around your curves. I want to be the fabric softly caressing every contour. Wow, i am all about this beauty. A favorite for sure!!
Nicole Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 12:44 PM
My heart is fluttering with you saying this. Your comment leaves me in complete awe. Thank you Jared, for your lovely comment, and for placing this in your favorites. Curves should be covered in casual lace. Yes, what a rush ! ! I'm smiling and blushing, all at the same time. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Sambourne Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 8:03 PM
Your poetry, Brandy, avoids the pitfall of over-writing like stock piling adjectives. There is a sparse, powerful resonance to each line. In fact, your concluding lines are so evocative in a sensual image of "casual lace." Congratulations! Brian
Nicole Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 8:48 PM
Oh, my ! I'm blushing and smiling all at the same time. My heart is fluttering too. I'm in complete awe with your comment and compliment, Brian. Thank you. Writing in this way, is very enjoyable indeed. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Delaney Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Hi Brandy: A lovely feminine word play that is definitely sensual and playful. Enjoyed the whole experience. Kudos, SuZ
Nicole Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 6:35 PM
Suzanne, so kind of you to read this scribble of mine. You are correct, it is filled with all of these emotions. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Baker Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 2:06 PM
Your careful choice of words and sensations make this sensual to the reader. Your words flow like water, smooth and refreshing. Thanks for sharing with us, Brandy. Hugs, Bill
Nicole Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 2:25 PM
My "words flow like water, smooth and refreshing." Such a beautiful thing to say about my poetry. I'm blushing and my heart is fluttering. Thank you Bill, for your lovely comment. This is one of my favorite scribbles. I like this form and these specific thoughts create such a breathtaking mood. You're very welcome. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Strand Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 1:07 AM
The type chosen Brandy,adds to the attraction
Nicole Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 1:33 PM
Thank you, Brian. This is one of my favorites, You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 11:49 PM
A sensual write beautifully penned. WoW! It has a touch of silken lace in it. Exquisite my friend. No wonder if got so many fave. Well deserved!
Nicole Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 7:32 PM
Oh my ! Thank Rama. This happens to be one of *my* favorites as well, because words are silky, smooth and playful, sensual and passionate. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. :) Brandy
Lindley Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 8:53 PM
Mercy please. That image sent my heart a'racing my friend. Your exquisite verses gave heat to the flame already started! You have gifted us a true romantic jewel. A pleasure to read such and remember what life, love and romance gives... A fav... Certainly POTD worthy.. God bless...
Nicole Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 5:23 PM
Robert, your thoughts bring a smile and make me blush. This photo is sensual, in such a tasteful way. Your kind words and compliments are greatly appreciated. Worthy of Poem of the Day. Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you for placing this in your favorites. Many blessings to you. :) Brandy
Foster Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 7:38 PM
A, truly beautiful use of style, pictures, and words... to provoke a feeling. Well done. Ann
Nicole Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 7:43 PM
You are so kind, Ann. Thank you for gracing my simple scribble with your lovely words. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 2:48 PM
Wow! Very silky, sensual, soft! Sensational poem, Brandy! Love ~ Mala
Nicole Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 7:26 PM
Thank you, Malabika. So kind of you to read this romantic, yet playful scribble of mine. It is filled with just the right amount of sensuality. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 3:04 PM
and I just love lace. What the girl is wearing. that is for me!!!
Nicole Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 8:07 PM
How wonderful, that you like lace and this style in particular. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 3:03 PM
ooh la la. A very sexy write, Brandy. Very well done.
Nicole Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 8:03 PM
Oh my ! Thank you, Andrea. "Lace" is both sexy and comfortable, all at the same time. :) Brandy
Callus Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Lace has often been described as being feminine, sensual and romantic, something which you have certainly applied to this excellent poem, Brandy. The 'rush' can undoubtedly be attributed to both the wearer and the viewer. With subtle insinuations you use 'veiled' imagery to appeal to the readers' imagination. Deserving of a fav . As Brandy Nicole would say: "these words caress softly around me." :) Hugs // paul
Nicole Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:44 PM
There is something comfortable, yet sensual about lace. (The photo to match my words before, expressed that clearly) I changed photos. Yet, this one is playful in it own way. You are right, Paul. The one wearing lace and the one beholding, feels that overwhelming *Rush* of excitement move through their being. So many vivid images within indeed. So sweet of you to place this in your favorites. Awe, now I am blushing with you saying this. Thank you, Paul. :) Hugs, Brandy
Watt Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 2:51 PM
Every line is pure Brandy: playful, imaginative, romantic and nuanced. Your writing always has a unique Brandyesque panache, but I am particularly struck by "Visual Vocabulary, *verbs being vocal*." The bridge between words and pure emotion is called poetry and you have once again walked us across that bridge. Beautiful and lovely from start to finish, my dear friend... a fave. Hugs ~ John
Nicole Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 5:14 PM
"Every line is pure Brandy" That thought alone says it all. Even though my writing has matured over the years, my unique style has stayed the same. I am happy that you enjoy walking along this bridge of beautiful emotions, my dear friend. Thank you John, for your lovely comment, and for placing this in your favorites. I am in awe. :) Hugs, Brandy
Goldsmith Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 12:28 PM
WOW!!!! What a creative write. Love It. Have a blessed day........................
Nicole Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Oh my ! Thank you, Paula. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your thoughts bring a smile. May you have a nice weekend. :) Brandy
Proxenos Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 5:32 AM
A sensual write my pretty friend ! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Nicole Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 6:10 PM
Thank you Jennifer, for your lovely comment and compliment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Mcintosh Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 6:41 PM
Lovely write, sweet friend. God bless you again and again. Love, Gina
Nicole Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 6:02 PM
Thank you, Regina. Many wonderful blessings to you. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:55 PM
Silky and seductive, and I like the font too, it goes with the feeling of intimacy so well~
Nicole Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 6:17 PM
Thank you, Michelle. There is something mesmerizing about this font. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Barden Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 7:41 PM
Very tenderly sensual, Brandy, like some fine Guiper latticework ... I enjoyed this very much, and must add to my faves! This is one of those I'll read again-and-again ... when the nights are too long ... and too dark. Blessings, Friend - love your work as always! :o) <3
Nicole Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 5:51 PM
My words are *like some fine Guiper latticework* Thank you, Greg. Such a wonderful compliment. When poetry softly whispers along the page, that alone can create a beautiful- sensual mood. I appreciate you placing this little scribble in your favorites and for saying that you love my work. My best to you. :) Brandy
Wolf Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 1:01 AM
A bit overpoweringly suggestive for my taste, certainly -- yet skillfully woven alliteratively, midst all that curvy imagery. Surely statuesque, Brandy. : gw
Nicole Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 2:26 PM
This is playful, yet tastefully written. I completely understand if these words are a bit over the top for you. Your honesty is greatly appreciated. Thank you Gershon, for being here and for being you. :) Brandy
Horsman Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 7:48 PM
Not only a clever poem, but so skilful in it's application. Love the ebbing stanzas, that drift into Alliteration. And of course the sensual sophistication, that truly makes this a wonderful poem.
Nicole Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Oh my ! I am humbled by your thoughts. I am just a simple poetess writing from the heart. Thank you, Harry. There is something magical about words and the way they touch. Your kind words and compliments mean so much. :) Brandy
Mcconnell Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Such beautiful wording Brandy, really superb and truly sensual a piece. You've penned a special one here. Take care and be blessed, Gordon
Nicole Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 4:47 PM
Thank you, Gordon. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Brandy
Sands Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Beautifully and creatively written Brandy :)
Nicole Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 4:36 PM
Thank you, Heidi. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy
Leffanta Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 11:57 AM
What a rush! Aloha! Rico
Nicole Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 4:20 PM
Yes, indeed ! Thank you, Rico. :) Brandy
Ibeh Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 5:58 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Brandy! A delightful read.
Nicole Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 4:19 PM
So kind of you to say. Thank you, Edward. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Superb, sensuous, seductive--you hit all the notes on this symphony of visual vocabulary, Brandy. Pleasing to creativity my friend---your images explode into elation. Into my FAVES.
Nicole Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 4:18 PM
Your comment is so beautiful and poetic. If *images explode into elation* It simply means, that I am able to create such a breathtaking moment and mood. (Which is a good thing) Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate you placing this little scribble in your favorites. :) Brandy
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