Castles In the Night

the clock stuttered towards midnight
I willed it to slow its step
hoped to persuade it to its knees:
to an intimate crawl,
but it wouldn’t

So I ran, quickening my steps between the ticks
sliding over hazel, mossy slips
racing up a stream
that glides mindfully past the seams
giggling, between the trickles
sending the rest in splashes at my toes
and now I know

A wall of tears may not be my end
but each second falls
I breathe in its rise
no rush, faith and trust
built her castles in the night

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Teagan Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 3:00 AM
I like the personification in this. Fun read!
Pettingill Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 9:15 PM
Thanks for your reply. Hope you enjoy my all poetry.
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