Castles by the Sea

A castle made of sand  
stands tall against the waves,  
safe behind  
the line we drew  
to catch the rising tide.

We watch the sea pour in  
to reach the mark we've made,
as memories  
and time absorb  
like water into sand.

And when the final grain  
has fallen on my time,  
and empty is  
the hourglass  
behind the fragile line,

the setting sun will hum  
a lullaby you've heard  
from moons ago,  
awaiting still  
a harmony not written.

And may this melody  
be known when I am gone,  
if just a whispered 
memory,  
a breath in morning wind.

Take with you our time,  
and take it down the line,  
where castles fall  
and rise again  
to greet the coming tides.

Each step that marks the past  
and those I've yet to take- 
the broken, bent,  
the stayed or strayed-  
all lines lead back to you.

Brave the shoreline, 
knowing where the tides 
have carried me.

I'll meet you where  
the circle ends and we  
begin again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 10/18/2024 4:59:00 PM
Haunting diction- I love poems on the sea...I believe in the wheels of time...hope it leads you home :)
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Date: 9/18/2024 12:21:00 AM
Such a beautiful description and poem. A fav for me!
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Date: 8/25/2024 3:10:00 AM
People can learn so much from you! The structure and rhymes are impressive. The poem will haunt me for long definetly. Made me reflect a lot.
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 8/25/2024 4:08:00 PM
I'm truly humbled but your kind words. Thank you so much. Xoxo Jess
Date: 8/23/2024 7:56:00 AM
I loved this imagery and beautifully written poem. Congratulations on your poem being featured on the Poety Soup homepage.
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 8/26/2024 5:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, I truly appreciate it! :) Xoxoxo
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