Castles

I'm kyanite-kissed venom ~ above castles of capitalised cryptics ~ choreographing l i f e in crescendos of constellations...

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/15/2025 6:12:00 PM

' choreographing l i f e in crescendos of constellations. ' Such a beautiful image, Hiya. This is the way it should always be, my sweet friend. Your thoughts take my heart to the sky. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/15/2025 9:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. What a creative write you have here. I also did castles. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.............

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/15/2025 9:43:00 AM

Hello Hiya, congratulations on your POTD win with your amazingly beautiful poem. Enjoy your day as you celebrate.

Paige Hind

Date: 5/15/2025 9:35:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, Hiya! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/15/2025 7:28:00 AM

Cordial, collegial congratulations on POTD. ~ Gershon

Tom Woody

Date: 5/15/2025 7:11:00 AM

Cosmic coolness. Enjoy your time in the sunlight

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/15/2025 6:40:00 AM

Well written. Congratulations :)

Valsa George

Date: 5/15/2025 5:56:00 AM

Hi dear Hiya, so happy to see you, young friend with stunning poetry written in your highly alliterative and metaphoric style. No wonder, this poem has become Poem of the Day. Your ability for alliteration can be equalled with only a few. Remarkable talent, dear friend. Hearty Congratulations.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/15/2025 5:32:00 AM

Dear Hiya, What a dream stitched in stardust. I think that you've bent language into constellations and venom into beauty… it’s alchemy. I love how you choreograph the unspeakable with such grace. Congratulations on POTD! Spring Blessings, My Dear Hiya!

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/15/2025 3:48:00 AM

Quite an alliteration, Hiya. Congratulations on POTD! Yay~ xhugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/15/2025 3:25:00 AM

Hiya, a lovely poem and imagery, congratulations on POTD.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/15/2025 2:09:00 AM

Enchanting use of alliteration and staggered patterns, fitting in beautifully with the contest theme ~ warmest congratulations on POTD, Hiya, happy to see you posting again.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/15/2025 2:06:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD. Your poem is delightful.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2025 2:01:00 AM

- A creative use of 15 words and performance - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/15/2025 1:14:00 AM

Your poem is simply mesmerizing and worthy of high placement. Sorry I am late in replying but I've been sick.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/14/2025 10:38:00 PM

Beautiful images of castles, gems and constellations, Hiya. Much enjoyed!

Paige Hind

Date: 5/14/2025 3:50:00 PM

This is lovely-! <3

Hiya Sharma
Date: 5/15/2025 6:00:00 AM

Aww, thank you sweet Paige! I'm glad you enjoyed reading this! Sending light and best wishes always :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/14/2025 10:33:00 AM

Quite interesting! Great alliteration!

Hiya Sharma
Date: 5/15/2025 5:59:00 AM

Aww, thank you so much dear Kim! Very grateful for your kindness and such a beautiful comment, sending light and best wishes :)

Lin Lane

Date: 5/14/2025 8:10:00 AM

I'm familiar with kyanite, having made jewelry from the beautiful blue stones. I don't kiss it with venom though, so whoever the cryptic in your lines, they won't be getting kudos from me. A fine use of 15 words, Hiya, and I applaud your message. Great to see you posting again.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/15/2025 10:37:00 AM

I'm quite well. Thank you for asking and congratulations on completing your university exams!

Hiya Sharma
Date: 5/15/2025 5:45:00 AM

Dear Lin, it's so lovely to receive such beautiful compliments from you! Thank you for understanding the core essence of my words and interpreting it into such a heartfelt manner ~ and with the grace of almighty I don't let those 'cryptics' dim my shine, haha. I'm so excited to be posting here again too, just got over with my university exams today! Hope you are doing well, happy Thursday, sending love and light :)