Castles


   I'm kyanite-kissed venom ~
      above castles 
             of capitalised cryptics ~ 
   choreographing
          l     i     f     e 
                  in crescendos
                                   of constellations... 
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Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 6:27 AM
Beautiful wording. Big congratulations
Empress Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 2:58 AM
Your poems are always so exquisite and so unique, you know exactly what i like and youv given something that is deeply emotive and so impressive , flowing with alliterations and brilliant diction. Each word in this hits deep, and i love how youv also presented your word weaving here! Very well written as always for the prompt, and perhaps cus you do micros alot you know how to give something that will stand out and to take the prompt to a whole different level: congratulations on your win: thank you for sharing. Sending you light
Gasun Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 8:26 AM
Such a gorgeous, creative and imaginative verse my dear poet friend Hiya. Congratulations on your POTD and excellent write! My great pleaseure to read. Thanks a lot for sharing this gem and your superb talent in poetry. God bless you always! Hugs
Nicole Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 6:12 PM
' choreographing l i f e in crescendos of constellations. ' Such a beautiful image, Hiya. This is the way it should always be, my sweet friend. Your thoughts take my heart to the sky. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Goldsmith Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 9:59 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a creative write you have here. I also did castles. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.............
Gifford Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 9:43 AM
Hello Hiya, congratulations on your POTD win with your amazingly beautiful poem. Enjoy your day as you celebrate.
Hind Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 9:35 AM
Congrats on POTD, Hiya! :)
Wolf Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 7:28 AM
Cordial, collegial congratulations on POTD. ~ Gershon
Sands Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 6:40 AM
Well written. Congratulations :)
George Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 5:56 AM
Hi dear Hiya, so happy to see you, young friend with stunning poetry written in your highly alliterative and metaphoric style. No wonder, this poem has become Poem of the Day. Your ability for alliteration can be equalled with only a few. Remarkable talent, dear friend. Hearty Congratulations.
Rodgers Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 5:32 AM
Dear Hiya, What a dream stitched in stardust. I think that you've bent language into constellations and venom into beauty… it’s alchemy. I love how you choreograph the unspeakable with such grace. Congratulations on POTD! Spring Blessings, My Dear Hiya!
Anaya Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 3:48 AM
Quite an alliteration, Hiya. Congratulations on POTD! Yay~ xhugs
Kitchin Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 3:25 AM
Hiya, a lovely poem and imagery, congratulations on POTD.
Seeker Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 2:09 AM
Enchanting use of alliteration and staggered patterns, fitting in beautifully with the contest theme ~ warmest congratulations on POTD, Hiya, happy to see you posting again.
Greenhough Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 2:06 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Your poem is delightful.
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 2:01 AM
- A creative use of 15 words and performance - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 1:14 AM
Your poem is simply mesmerizing and worthy of high placement. Sorry I am late in replying but I've been sick.
Buehler Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 10:38 PM
Beautiful images of castles, gems and constellations, Hiya. Much enjoyed!
Hind Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 3:50 PM
This is lovely-! <3
Sharma  Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 6:00 AM
Aww, thank you sweet Paige! I'm glad you enjoyed reading this! Sending light and best wishes always :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 10:33 AM
Quite interesting! Great alliteration!
Sharma  Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 5:59 AM
Aww, thank you so much dear Kim! Very grateful for your kindness and such a beautiful comment, sending light and best wishes :)
Lane Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 8:10 AM
I'm familiar with kyanite, having made jewelry from the beautiful blue stones. I don't kiss it with venom though, so whoever the cryptic in your lines, they won't be getting kudos from me. A fine use of 15 words, Hiya, and I applaud your message. Great to see you posting again.
Lane Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 10:37 AM
I'm quite well. Thank you for asking and congratulations on completing your university exams!
Sharma  Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 5:45 AM
Dear Lin, it's so lovely to receive such beautiful compliments from you! Thank you for understanding the core essence of my words and interpreting it into such a heartfelt manner ~ and with the grace of almighty I don't let those 'cryptics' dim my shine, haha. I'm so excited to be posting here again too, just got over with my university exams today! Hope you are doing well, happy Thursday, sending love and light :)
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