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Castle Tableau

Yearning to shave time, amass his fortunes, he set his sights on uncharted waters and built a castle in the sand instead. ————— for the Tableau Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May written 08/19/23 using Image #1

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Date: 8/29/2023 10:55:00 AM
So good, Jeff! I love your emphasis on building on a firm foundation and taking time to build the "castle" correctly - not in haste! Congrats and high fives! It is so nice to have you back in the soup! Blessings!
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Date: 8/21/2023 3:01:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem ... creatively written, Jeff :) -
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Date: 8/21/2023 1:54:00 AM
Very nicely done; congratulations
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Date: 8/20/2023 3:51:00 PM
Creative take on the picture, Jeff! Well done! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/20/2023 12:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jeff, Very nicely penned
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Date: 8/20/2023 10:55:00 AM
Back with congratulations!
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Date: 8/19/2023 4:31:00 PM
It’s good to see you posting again, Jeff.
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Date: 8/19/2023 8:30:00 AM
Rich Jeff .
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Date: 8/19/2023 6:25:00 AM
I love this because it makes me smile and ponder! A fave!
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Date: 8/19/2023 6:32:00 AM
thanks, Kim - I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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