Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Castle On a Hill

Castle on a Hill Contest
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron


Chateau with elevation inclined on top of the knoll

Ascending into the citadel where the Prince reads his scroll

Sloping down toward the guards who need to patrol

Tower laying on the highest bluff for all the land to see

Lady Isabelle, so beautiful with sparkling eyes, I’d agree

Eminence of dwellers bowing down to the manor's decree


This castle looks like it was made perfect and built for a King,
 the height carries a fortress for all the land dwellers to see,
the rising of the orb skyline compliments the coming of Spring
a perfect home for a princess…and now a family of three.

~Date Written: April 20, 2016~

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Wendy Rycroft May 1, 2016 at 4:06 AM Congrats well written xx

Balveen Cheema April 28, 2016 at 9:20 AM Luloo it is a great poem ! Congrats on your wonderful placement! Beautiful Scars April 28, 2016 at 11:33 AM thank you Balveen! :)-luloo

Sara Chansarkar April 28, 2016 at 8:32 AM Congratulations Laura! Beautiful Scars April 28, 2016 at 11:32 AM thank you Sara :)-luloo

Moon Flower April 28, 2016 at 8:06 AM Congrats on your top win, luloo! :) Beautiful Scars April 28, 2016 at 11:32 AM thank you Moon Flower (I love your name ) -luloo :)

Lin Lane April 27, 2016 at 2:04 PM I will congratulate you on your placement, Laura. Beautiful Scars April 27, 2016 at 2:38 PM many thanks lady :)-luloo

Joyce Johnson April 27, 2016 at 1:16 PM Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Beautiful Scars April 27, 2016 at 2:38 PM thank you Joyce :)-luloo

Bl Devnath April 27, 2016 at 12:52 PM Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Beautiful Scars April 27, 2016 at 1:00 PM BL, many thanks :)-luloo

Sandra Haight April 27, 2016 at 12:52 PM Back to congratulate you, Luloo, on your well-deserved placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Beautiful Scars April 27, 2016 at 1:00 PM many thanks Sandra, right back atcha! Be blessed :)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores April 27, 2016 at 12:37 PM Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest. Beautiful Scars April 27, 2016 at 12:52 PM thank you Nayda very much :)-luloo Beautiful Scars April 27, 2016 at 12:52 PM sorry I just saw this comment! Many thanks-luloo :)

Sandra Haight April 25, 2016 at 7:10 PM Lovely 'castle on a hill' poem, Luloo. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France April 21, 2016 at 9:16 PM Laura, great write for the contest, I am loving it 7 ~ Beautiful Scars April 22, 2016 at 8:07 AM thank you Broken Wings :)-luloo

Nette Onclaud April 21, 2016 at 4:04 PM very fine read with a babe to complete the story, lou... huggs! Beautiful Scars April 21, 2016 at 4:24 PM thank you Nette:)-luloo

Joanna Daniel April 21, 2016 at 7:55 AM Great write:) all the best :) Beautiful Scars April 21, 2016 at 1:14 PM many thanks Jo :)-luloo

Ravi Sathasivam April 20, 2016 at 11:50 PM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Beautiful Scars April 21, 2016 at 1:13 PM thank you Ravi :)-luloo

Izzy B Hearty Brave Heart April 20, 2016 at 10:55 PM Wow! Great job, I love this piece!:) Beautiful Scars April 21, 2016 at 9:07 AM I just realized your name is in it!!! Beautiful name for sure :)-luloo Beautiful Scars April 21, 2016 at 9:06 AM thank you Isabelle :)-luloo