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Cast Away--Wilson the Volleyball

A stranded lone man
talking to a volleyball...
personified friend

though only listens
it gives him inspiration...
wilson the friend




© kashinath karmakar (Dec 2011)
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Placement:9th;(Dec 2011)

Contest:Senryu me a movie Scene

Sponsor:Andrea Dietrich

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Poet Destroyer A

March 2, 2012 at 9:50 PM

KASH..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd

Nette Onclaud

January 11, 2012 at 1:53 AM

belated congrats, kashi.. how you were able t tell a story in such few words is amazing!!.. soupy mail!

Tirzah Conway

January 9, 2012 at 9:48 AM

WILSON!!! I love this movie - Congrats on your win!~Tirzah~

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 9, 2012 at 7:25 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Movie Senryu" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2012 at 11:11 AM

Hi, Kash, finally I can come here and tell you thanks for doing my contest though I know a movie senryu is hard for someone not a movie buff. This was cute. I remember the movie and really liked it. Congrats on your win with me and Nikko.Luv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

January 7, 2012 at 2:35 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Kash. Love, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

January 7, 2012 at 1:50 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 7, 2012 at 12:35 PM

Ahh who could ever forget Wilson?? This one captured that moment well... it had this simplicity about it but it brings the movie clearly-- Congrats on your win, Kash! :D

Gwendolen Song

January 7, 2012 at 3:11 AM

hi Kash...I really like both senryu but the 2nd one grabs me the most. The final line is strong with its simplicity...congrats to you. Gwendolen

Harry Horsman

January 2, 2012 at 7:22 AM

got to be in the winners circle this Kash, brilliant. Happy New Year. harry

James Fraser

January 2, 2012 at 6:44 AM

Koolio take on the Tom Hanks movie "Castaway" - good luck in the contest Kash & a Happy New Year to you :)

Greg Stanley

January 2, 2012 at 12:31 AM

Absolutly perfect... a winner indeed, captured it so well, best of luck in the contest, Greg

Gwendolen Song

January 1, 2012 at 6:07 PM

DING DING DING.........W I N N E R !!!!!!! Excellent senryu, Kash. How DO U DO IT???? Had to rewrite mine completely bc it wasn't descriptive of the scene...oh well...this one rocks. Merry New Year! Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

January 1, 2012 at 4:50 PM

Happy New Year Kash,,, Did you know that his ball wilson, had a secret part in the cartoon movie MADAGASCAR" and another movie... can't remember the other one i'd seen it in... That ball be came real famous.... And can you imagine the advertisement alone on the name brand of the volley ball was pretty sneaky....love that movie... great senryu....always,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

January 1, 2012 at 4:02 PM

Cute.. Got a chuckle..Interesting topic and presentation..Thanks for stopping by..May this be the greatest year of your life up to this point..Sara

Wilma Neels

January 1, 2012 at 12:05 PM

Stunning entry for Andrea's contest Kash!! All the best for the contest :)

Caryl Muzzey

January 1, 2012 at 11:13 AM

Kash, a wonderful Senryu and entry for the contest. I enjoyed the read, best to you~Caryl Soup mail

Phyllis Babcock

January 1, 2012 at 9:45 AM

Liked the movie and Tom Hanks did a great job with Wilson the ball. Happy New Years to you and your family. love phyl

Michael J. Falotico

January 1, 2012 at 6:57 AM

Great movie here!! Tom Hanks is my fav... Best of luck in the contest... Happy New Year my friend.... Michael

Nette Onclaud

January 1, 2012 at 2:38 AM

you bring back poignant memories, kashi buddy.. a poetic gem that is a winner for me!.. may the new year bring you much serneity and bliss.:) huggs and thanks for everything!

Robert Pettit

December 31, 2011 at 11:57 PM

Sounds like that guy is in need of friends. If my only friend was a volleyball, I would be in terrible shape. Good write Kash.

Bl Devnath

December 31, 2011 at 2:29 PM

Nicely worded your write, loved it. Happy New 2012, bl

David Williams

December 31, 2011 at 9:55 AM

Kash best tribute I ever read to a ball, love it, good luck, Happy New Year..David

M.I.A .

December 30, 2011 at 8:55 PM

The Best Supporting Act goes to Wilson! if ever a volleyball could win an Oscar. Nicely done kash, you captured the loneliness yet enlighten moment at the same time.