Cascading Whispers

cascading kissed silken whispers
rushing
crashing
producing
a mist of forgotten raptures

soft harmonies
sprinkled against an undying twilight

countless poetic words written
but none can compare to
or describe your beautiful lasting sight

winged creature 
that gives my pen passionate flight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 5:01 PM
woohhoo a lovely sensual romantic write Sebastian:-) Hugs jan xx
Baez Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 5:10 PM
Thanks Jan. I have a whole bunch of these stockpiled and just collecting dust. I guess you can say I'm a hoarder! :)
Chircop Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 4:14 PM
I like it when the romantic side of Seb is heard through the wild woods : ).May your angel slways be your last beautiful sight.before you write so you give us more of this.Adding it to my favs.(Seb did you ever hear from izzy jumbo?Its been years,you cane back but she never did,I miss her great poetry).
Baez Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 4:46 PM
I like it when the romantic side of seb is heard to. I'm Working on another poem right now. But I don't think I'll be done today. Being romantic drains my battery quick. I still haven't heard anything from izzy :( Thank you for your wonderful comment. It's always a lovely delight seeing your avatar :)
Nance Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 1:26 PM
Awesome words so wickedly worked together. :)
Baez Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Thank you my personal ray of sunshine!
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 1:05 PM
romantic Seby ...all the girls will be swooning.
Baez Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 2:34 PM
That's my master plan (insert mad scientist laugh) :)
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