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Cascading Tears

Love, sublime, between heart and pain conceives eggs of tears; heart fondly nurtures, nurses labours and bursts right like a volcano and cascading tears quench the blazing pyre.
Revised Picture 2 Syllable Count: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 - 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 http://www.howmanysyllables.com Nov. 2, 2020 Double Tetractys 5 Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 11/5/2020 5:22:00 PM
OH MY, but this is gorgeously done. I especially loved that line, “eggs of tears” amazing :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/5/2020 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Akkina, for this impressively beautiful comment!!
Date: 11/5/2020 3:13:00 PM
very well done and a poignant piece!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/5/2020 3:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this great comment!!
Date: 11/5/2020 3:39:00 AM
- "eggs of tears" ... dramatic tears, Newton :) - A lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest ... a winning poem for sure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/5/2020 11:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this immensely beautiful comment and the complement!!
Date: 11/3/2020 4:20:00 PM
Hello Bewton Arch, tears are happiness or sadness. It is okay to cry it is part of healing. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/4/2020 10:50:00 AM
Hello Newton Arch, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy yourday.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/3/2020 4:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene, for this so sweet comment!!
Date: 11/3/2020 11:58:00 AM
a very powerful write indeed
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/3/2020 12:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jack, for this impressively great comment!!

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