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Cascading Curtains

Written by: James Fraser I view, witnessing natures champagne. Her shape through translucent curtains captures my hunger, I crave. Undulations glisten, amidst the Spring morn. To me she walks, my heart beats. Our lips, Kiss ~*~ For Michael J. Falotico's "Spring Kiss" Contest ~*~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/24/2011 9:09:00 AM
sensual and beautiful
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Date: 3/22/2011 6:32:00 AM
ABSOLUTELY BREATHTAKING, JAMES. LAINIE
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Date: 3/19/2011 7:31:00 AM
A beauty. Concise and just right =) Always, Farah
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Date: 3/19/2011 6:16:00 AM
Romantic and sweetly written James.. good luck in Michael's cool contest mixing Spring and kisses together luv.. brilliant as always ..happy weekend...
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Date: 3/19/2011 6:14:00 AM
awesome James, brilliant title, every line so creative. good luck. Harry
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Date: 3/19/2011 6:03:00 AM
how totally inviting, james! well-written lines capture the glory of morning spring! winning wishes to you..:) huggs, nette
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