Cascading Curtains

Written by:  James Fraser


I view, witnessing natures champagne.
Her shape through translucent curtains
captures my hunger, I crave.
Undulations glisten,
amidst the Spring morn.
To me she walks,
my heart beats.
Our lips,
Kiss






~*~ For Michael J. Falotico's "Spring Kiss" Contest ~*~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bloomsfield Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 9:09 AM
sensual and beautiful
George   Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 6:32 AM
ABSOLUTELY BREATHTAKING, JAMES. LAINIE
Chamma Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 7:31 AM
A beauty. Concise and just right =) Always, Farah
Sweetheart Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 6:16 AM
Romantic and sweetly written James.. good luck in Michael's cool contest mixing Spring and kisses together luv.. brilliant as always ..happy weekend...
Horsman Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 6:14 AM
awesome James, brilliant title, every line so creative. good luck. Harry
Onclaud Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 6:03 AM
how totally inviting, james! well-written lines capture the glory of morning spring! winning wishes to you..:) huggs, nette
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