Cas Tim Jan and Me

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You have all heard I am sure of the three musketeers
The group with the swords not the ones with the funny ears

Reminds me of a joke that right here would apply
There are three kinds of people I tell you no lie
Those who are really quite good at math
And those who are not and that's that

They were the three musketeers but they were four
Their math was bad not three, four and no more
I hope you're all still with me, I'm not trying to be a pest
I need you to follow me because at the end there's a test

There is Casarah 
Yeah and hurrah
She is a good ma

Then there is Tim
You should know him
He's tall and trim

And  finally there is the kind hearted Jan
From England she's the one with no tan
Coy and demure behind her fancy fan
 
 If you kept count that makes three
Who can argue. You'd have to agree.
Now we have arrived at what I am trying to say
I've just joined them and I quite enjoy sword play

Do you see? I am number four.
I'll just walk through their door.
That makes me the best, the fillet mignon
It turns  out that I am frikin'  D'Artagnan.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/21/2015 5:28:00 PM
:) :):):):) linda
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Date: 10/3/2014 10:13:00 PM
soupmail right away!!
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Date: 9/30/2014 4:11:00 PM
Nice. Thank you very much. Best wishes from India.
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Date: 9/29/2014 10:59:00 PM
Very good, Maurice.
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Date: 9/20/2014 10:49:00 AM
Congrats, Maurice. You're a tight bunch!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/20/2014 8:29:00 PM
Thank you. They are three amazing people.
Date: 9/18/2014 6:24:00 PM
Enjoyed the added lines and the added photo, I betcha my bright orange one represent me right :) ha cool man, glad to have u hear :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/18/2014 9:25:00 PM
Yes you are right Jan. No picture through POD!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/18/2014 9:24:00 PM
Jan are you still on your meds?
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/18/2014 7:42:00 PM
Wait on want to be on top :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 7:13:00 PM
If I log on via your own page I see beautiful feathers:-) But if I log on through POD they aren't there!! Hugs Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/18/2014 6:51:00 PM
The bright orange one is on top so yeah that would be you Cas.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 6:35:00 PM
I can't see the picture:-( Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/18/2014 6:12:00 AM
Very enjoyable, entertaining and witty, Maurice! Congrats on your poem of the week. Blessings! Darlene
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Date: 9/18/2014 2:34:00 AM
Congratulations for having the poem of the week!
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Date: 9/17/2014 3:00:00 PM
love the three lines you have added about us Maurice - now you have finally discovered the real me - coy and demure and hiding ;-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 10:03:00 AM
hes right it is me:-) Hugs Jan x
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/17/2014 4:47:00 PM
Yep that's you :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/17/2014 3:20:00 PM
thank you again, if not for you three this would have never done so well.
Date: 9/16/2014 11:27:00 PM
It is now the number one poem :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/17/2014 1:37:00 PM
only because of Jan, Cas and you. you three have been the proverbial oasis in the desert. thanks bud.
Date: 9/16/2014 7:50:00 AM
Witty..:) they are all really kind..:)!! Cassie Tim and jan..:) sweet Maurice..:)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:32:00 PM
thank you Olive.
Date: 9/15/2014 6:11:00 PM
How fun that is this to be poem of the week. A great selection that me think. :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:33:00 PM
It is all because of you Cas, Jan and Tim
Date: 9/15/2014 5:06:00 AM
D'Artagnan..This poem is so sweet and entertaining as all four of you in the group.I am glad they picked it as poem of the week cause it gives a delicious taste to the soup.One that is refreshing and loyal.What can be more beautiful than transmitting friendship when in all corners of the world all We hear of are about wars..Im happy happy you have this poem to be showcased for a whole week.Well done tps .
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:34:00 PM
you are always supportive, thank you.
Date: 9/15/2014 4:27:00 AM
Guess that I will have to become part of the madness too or also or tambie'n. Would I arguably have to agree and does filet mignon rhyme with dominion and onion. Oh, and do you have a passion to be carted off as a Kardasian which is Cartesian in my spell check. Andddd If to facts I were to allude, would I have to be in the nude and even tattooed? Jim Horn.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:36:00 PM
thank you James
Date: 9/14/2014 8:34:00 PM
Big congrats on this being Poem of the Week.... So enjoyed reading this one! Bravo!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:34:00 PM
Thank you my friend!
Date: 9/14/2014 7:28:00 PM
I don't know exactly what's going on here, LOL, but I got a small picture of it, I love it, your collaboration for this write is wonderful, so enjoyable, and nice to know you can work together :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:35:00 PM
they are great people, thank you.
Date: 9/14/2014 5:30:00 PM
Congratulations on the poem of the week.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:36:00 PM
Thank you Allan.
Date: 9/14/2014 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the poem of the week Maurice... Verlena
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:35:00 PM
Thank you Veriena.
Date: 9/14/2014 3:17:00 PM
woot woot you totally deserve it!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:36:00 PM
thank you Alison.
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James Horn
Date: 9/15/2014 4:33:00 AM
Is that where Michael Jackson is right but it is a heavenly one this time I hope. I have to be careful. Last time I started posting messages to PoetrySoup and LinkedIn someone restricted my activity and said I needed some training called sensitivity. Jim Horn
Date: 9/14/2014 1:56:00 PM
Congrats my friend,.,..woohoo
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:37:00 PM
It is all because of you Tim , Jan and Cas
Date: 9/14/2014 1:32:00 PM
I hope you will jump to the top of the list with the best new poems too Maurice - am delighted to be a member of the four musky tears:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2014 5:42:00 PM
That is great news for us all Maurice:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:39:00 PM
It is all because of you Jan, Tim and Cas. Today we went to number one new poems.
Date: 9/14/2014 12:56:00 PM
Definately a FUN poem. Congrats on Poem of the Week!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:39:00 PM
Thank you Carol.
Date: 9/14/2014 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on being poem of the week... This is sweet. Love and prayers and God bless you, Gina
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:40:00 PM
Thank You Gina
Date: 9/14/2014 12:13:00 PM
I love that time period as my time machine will attest. This must have been fun writing. Congrats 2U.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:42:00 PM
Thank you Thomas
Date: 9/14/2014 6:30:00 AM
:))) ... love it - * - * - * - Congratulations on the "Poem of the Week", Maurice !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/16/2014 5:41:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
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