Cartwheels of the Soul

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Slip and turn take me away from here 
says the conscience to the soul 
Spokes as firm as earth slowly adhere 
ways of life are known, their goal ...

Wagons circle dusty roads and curbs 
rays of light emitted from the sun 
Water is thicker then personal orbs 
rotate your eyes, fix them on none 

Move to the rhythm of your heart 
for ways are crooked these days 
don't give away your widsom's art 
frontier your soul with om'lays 

with every slip and turn the cartwheel grows 
with every slip and turn, the wind blows....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/28/2021 11:39:00 PM
A delicious poem from a wondrous mind one that delves in pure artistry.
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Date: 8/21/2021 3:15:00 PM
There is something about every slip and turn that make us grow, Love it!
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Date: 8/20/2021 1:20:00 PM
I like how you say to keep your eyes moving but not fixed on any one thing, and to move with the flow of your unique rhythm; I don't know if this is for a contest, but if so it should be on the winner's list!
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Date: 8/20/2021 5:50:00 AM
It's true to say your conscience speaks through your heart? Listening to your heart is good advice. I enjoyed this poem...Delice
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Date: 8/20/2021 5:06:00 AM
Superb writing, Vie. I'll have to keep my conscience on a leash. Hugs.
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