Cart Wheeling Crystals

Snow flakes
Tapping glass
One by one, 
Scraping silence 
From the pane of autumn’s stare
Where they gather 
In mute reflections, 
Like moths to a flame

Blustering into chaotic rhythm
White upon light, 
Cart-wheeling crystals
Frozen in free 
Falling eddies now
Gathering upon a wind, 
In violent whiteout

As a fire stares 
Back from beyond the hearth
A sentinel 
Of warmth bearing 
Witness to fair warning

From an army of 
Snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/19/2015 5:51:00 PM
this is so filled with clever imagery. Wow, one of my faves of yours. A big FAVE on this one,
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Mark Trichet
Date: 6/19/2015 6:01:00 PM
Hey there Andrea, thnx for the visit on this one. It was one of my early scribbles into poetry...glad you liked it! :)
Date: 7/3/2014 5:19:00 AM
A sublime poem with poetic subliminal touches. Kudos! The last stanza was esp great. Pls do review my latest poem too.
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