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Carry You Home

From the house of the dead comes a quiet whisper it’s eerie but there’s more here, I need there to be more … while undeniably, the hairs raised on the back of my neck send chills tumbling down my spine, the tremble under my skin shoots sparks of excitement I feel electric so alive here in this house of death drop by drop, a cold sweat emanates on my skin; the physical effect of the chaos of clashing emotions colliding intensity building as I take another step into the darkness my heart warring my mind, my soul, my legs, and still I move on the call, so soft, barely a breath is a siren call into madness there in the blackest abyss, a twinkling star It glows brighter and brighter as I near the source, I close my eyes to the glare my legs falter and I crumple to the floor in despairing dismay a gentle touch on my shoulder comforts me a radiant caress of love coats me in luminosity I stare into translucent kind eyes so known to me ‘You are never alone, even in the darkest of times I will be with you always And when your time comes I will carry you home …’ 26.02.2021 - ghost poetry contest

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Date: 2/26/2022 9:27:00 AM
Wow -- dramatic! Shades of Edgar Allan Poe here. Love that last line: "And when your time comes I will carry you home …". Good stuff, Melody. Enjoyed! :) john
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Melody Wiggett
Date: 3/8/2022 11:59:00 PM
:)I can't begin to tell you how flattered I am ... I am such a fan of Edgar Allan Poe, so just Wow! Thank You! This compliment will be living in my heart rent free :) I'm so happy you enjoyed it :) Really, Thank You soo much :)

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