Carry Me With You

Why do you seem to slip into everything but me?
What capacity does every other form possess?
How do I mimic its shape?
How do I extend its depth?

I disperse myself into everything, 
In a hope that in fragments I may find my way to You.
Into Your nostrils,
Under Your finger nails,
Between Your teeth,

Carry me with You.
Carry me with You.

I want to be the smells which cling to Your hair, 
So that I may brush ever so softly against Your cheeks.

I want to be the dirt which fills the ruts of Your nails,
So that I may be a part of everything You hold dear.

I want to be the food which adorns Your teeth,
So that I may hang on every word You say.

Carry me with You.
Carry me with You.
For, You have long since taken me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 28, 2013 at 2:14 PM
Stopping by to read this poem again :-) .. many thoughts to see. The repeating title, does good with the flow. I can read this verse over and over... You did wonderful with the image and line..."" I want to be the smells which cling to Your hair, So that I may brush ever so softly against Your cheeks.""" very charming and pretty... enjoyed~PD
Goldstone Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 2:32 PM
Thank You. :)
A   Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 7:09 PM
Jessica, congratulations with your amazing win.. xox~PD
Guzzi Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Such a powerful write you are asking to be consumed? Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love
Goldstone Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 3:42 PM
Thank You Debbie. :) I am consumed, I am asking for this consumption to be approved, desired and very hopefully even reciprocated or returned. I want her to slip into me, the way I slip into everything hoping it will find it's way to her.
Jordan Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 9:12 PM
I've read and re-read your poems tonight. They are wonderful! I love the intensity and rich description. Congratulations on a fine collection. I look forward to reading more in the future. Jack
Goldstone Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 10:38 AM
Thank You Jack. I am glad that you are enjoying my work. :)
Merryman Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 8:03 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Jessica! Love, Kim
Bunton Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on win Jessica xx
Andresen Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 10:40 AM
A lovely and romantic poem, Jessica. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 2:02 PM
Jessica just back for a re-read of this little gem...David
Goldstone Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 3:47 PM
Thanks David :)
Williams Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 1:24 PM
Jessica very romantic write...David
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