Carrick Dawn

I kissed her cheeks of salty tears,
For she had broken my cold
Resolve for all my fears
Of natures gifts, warmth of old.
She touched my spine, my fate.

She turned, asleep to my sinking grace
Its origin before men learned
To dance with feet, to die with thoughts.
She spells my name in frosty air,
A scent of honey, her soft blonde hair.

As dawn spills its truth she is not there.
A broken man, an empty chair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cornwall Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 8:35 AM
Lovely poem and congrats on feature.". Patrick
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 5:41 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Johnny. Love, Carol
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April 29, 2012 at 3:50 AM
Very nice imagery... Terry
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April 26, 2012 at 1:01 PM
Well worth reading, Johnny! Excellent choice of words in this poem, really liked it! oxox Laila
Grisetti Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 9:36 PM
Your peom shows some lovely images, but the tone is sad.
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