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Carpet Interlude

on the lush carpet I explored his lips and kissed him with lust and he responded- to ravage my mouth we were lost in ecstasy . . . I panted his name and he whispered mine until we swirled higher and higher above the clouds like birds in a wind current then falling falling . . . ___________________________ June 4, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/carpet interlude Copyright Protected, ID 20-1258-111-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Some Kind of Sensual sponsor, Nette Onclaud, 45 words First Place

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Date: 6/8/2020 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your podium finish, Constance. Definitely sensual!!Regards // paul
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Date: 6/8/2020 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a carpet ride. Your pen was writing romance. Enjoy your win and day........
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2020 4:40:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations, comment and visit_Constance
Date: 6/8/2020 9:12:00 AM
You master at writing sensual and romance poetry Constance. Congratulations on your win :)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2020 4:40:00 PM
Aditi, thanks for the compliment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 6/7/2020 8:33:00 PM
A perfect ending to a lovely romantic write, Constance. Congratulations on your #1 placement ~ John
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2020 4:41:00 PM
John, thanks for the comment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 6/7/2020 7:21:00 PM
congratulations on your win Dear Heart, a carpet to remember
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2020 4:41:00 PM
Frederic, thanks for the congratulations _Constance
Date: 6/4/2020 3:23:00 PM
Lovely sensual write DH, best wishes
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2020 4:42:00 PM
Joseph, thanks for visiting with the lovely _Constance
Date: 6/4/2020 2:29:00 PM
Beautifully done, Constance--loved the emotions throughout--especially the rise and fall in the ending lines. A FAVE for me.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2020 4:42:00 PM
Vijay, thanks for the beautiful and the FAV _Constance

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