Constance La France Poet Free verse

Carpet Interlude

                      on the lush carpet
I explored his lips and kissed him with lust
and he responded- to ravage my mouth 
       we were lost in ecstasy . . . 
I panted his name and he whispered mine
                           until                              
we swirled higher and higher above the clouds
             like birds in a wind current
                             then falling 
                                           falling . . .

                                   

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June 4, 2020


Poetry/Free Verse/carpet interlude
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1258-111-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the Standard contest, Some Kind of Sensual
sponsor, Nette Onclaud, 45 words

First Place

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Paul Callus June 8, 2020 at 4:54 PM Congratulations on your podium finish, Constance. Definitely sensual!!Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith June 8, 2020 at 3:50 PM Congratulations on your win. What a carpet ride. Your pen was writing romance. Enjoy your win and day........ Constance La France June 8, 2020 at 4:40 PM Paula, thanks for the congratulations, comment and visit_Constance

Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 9:12 AM You master at writing sensual and romance poetry Constance. Congratulations on your win :) Constance La France June 8, 2020 at 4:40 PM Aditi, thanks for the compliment and congratulations _Constance

John Watt June 7, 2020 at 8:33 PM A perfect ending to a lovely romantic write, Constance. Congratulations on your #1 placement ~ John Constance La France June 8, 2020 at 4:41 PM John, thanks for the comment and congratulations _Constance

Frederic Parker June 7, 2020 at 7:21 PM congratulations on your win Dear Heart, a carpet to remember Constance La France June 8, 2020 at 4:41 PM Frederic, thanks for the congratulations _Constance

Joseph May June 4, 2020 at 3:23 PM Lovely sensual write DH, best wishes Constance La France June 8, 2020 at 4:42 PM Joseph, thanks for visiting with the lovely _Constance

Vijay Pandit June 4, 2020 at 2:29 PM Beautifully done, Constance--loved the emotions throughout--especially the rise and fall in the ending lines. A FAVE for me. Constance La France June 8, 2020 at 4:42 PM Vijay, thanks for the beautiful and the FAV _Constance