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Carpet Burn

We lie in each other’s arms as I run my fingers through my lover’s lush locks of hair In plush leisure we roll with abandon on the floor - in tune with each other’s bodies rocking into the night - carpet burn likely June 4, 2020 Chose word #1: Carpet 41(?) words for nette onclaud's 'SOME KIND OF SENSUAL' Contest By the way, Wordcounter says 43 words, but if I remove my 2 hyphens, it DOES say 41 then!

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Date: 6/9/2020 11:32:00 AM
Hi, :) <3 Better than fleas. :) lol
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Date: 6/8/2020 9:22:00 AM
I love the mystery throughout your poetry. Also the carpet burn at the end is witty. Congratulations on your win Andrea :)
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Date: 6/8/2020 7:41:00 AM
John's remark of being sensual free is correct. I fail to see what's sensual about carpet burns.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/8/2020 2:38:00 PM
well, it was kind of a joke, Lin. Hunka hunka burning love and all that jazz. Getting carpet burns is said to be the sign of very passionate sex, but what would I know about it. haha
Date: 6/8/2020 2:10:00 AM
A rollicking, fun, sensual free verse, Andrea. Congrats on your win and try some aliens Vera on the carpet burns, haha! ~ John
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Date: 6/7/2020 5:53:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/6/2020 6:57:00 AM
Ah, this sounds mysteriously sensual and deeply satisfying Andrea.
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Date: 6/5/2020 4:42:00 PM
This one made me smile Andrea. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/5/2020 2:39:00 PM
wonderful, andrea! good luck in the contest...
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Date: 6/5/2020 10:19:00 AM
Ha ha ha, I’ve been burned a few times. Absolutely worth it!
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Date: 6/5/2020 7:44:00 AM
Sounds like fun, get the salon ready lol
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Date: 6/5/2020 7:02:00 AM
Sensual joy of life in every word, Andrea.
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Date: 6/5/2020 4:07:00 AM
i love the line in plush leisure - it made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/4/2020 10:32:00 PM
I really love where you went with your entry, Andrea...you can't have passion without a good sense of humor! Love it and BIG thanks for the visit tonight and FAVE. (this one is a FAVE for me) xx Rhonda
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Date: 6/4/2020 10:20:00 PM
Very nice Andrea.
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Date: 6/4/2020 8:48:00 PM
Get that first aid kit ready for that magic carpet ride! Interesting ink, Andrea. Made me think. Cheers, Gershon
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