Carpathian Curse

The light of the moon serves as source
For my once beating heart, now still
As I wander the lonely corridors of time
Eternal, to grip my breathless, lifeless chest
Each day’s a seductress, but surely my death
For the awaking moon is my life, my morning
To then search high and low for fulfillment
Only to be left with blood of life, not my own
Oh, the pain of the never aging flesh I retain
It serves as the captor, the origin of my demise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/28/2008 3:19:00 PM
Good Halloween stuff. Let's get right in the casket with him. Love it, Mike. daver
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Date: 10/28/2008 7:17:00 AM
Hi Michael! Like Christopher and Christie I was immediately drawn in by the title. As a regular visitor to these wonderful mountains, I wondered if it would have a Dracula theme. I was at Bran Castle only a couple of weeks ago. Anyway, I digress. After the draw of the title, I wasn't disappointed by the image dripping content. Another amazing write! Love, Nigel
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Date: 10/28/2008 5:19:00 AM
This poem reads like a piece out of a shakespeare. I was drawn in Michael by your word choice and the images that you painted. I especially loved the fourth line with each day being a seductress. Great stuff.
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