Carolyn

Like freshness of Spring Wearing rosebuds in her cheeks She came to greet me Eyes that shine eternal love Truth and beauty to give me For Rick's "Memory of Beauty" contest © Aug 5 2010
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Scripca Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 5:24 PM
How lucky you are with this beautiful Carolyn, dear Charles. Congrats on the win.
K. Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 8:27 AM
This sure conjures up such a beautiful image of Carolyn, Charles :) belated congrats on your win with this :) -- nikko :)
Augustus Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Richards Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 6:25 PM
This is such a heartwarming poem of love! So beautiful! Congratulations, Charles! ~ Carrie
Devonshire Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:38 PM
What a wonderful tribute to your wife, Charles! Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest tanka contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:21 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest, Charles
Fraser Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 2:22 PM
Many congratulations Charles on your win in Rick's fine contest with this beautiful Tanka >> James
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 4:48 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 8:39 PM
Lovely poem and tribute to true beauty. Congratualtions. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 7:28 PM
Very nice, Charles! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 6:41 PM
Congrats Charles on your big win in Rick's Tanka contest ... awesome as usual... and u had a lovely subject for words...my friend... enjoyed with luv..
Mehta Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 8:35 PM
Wonderful to the contest. Good luck in the contest, Charles
Roberts Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 8:10 PM
lovely, good luck in the contest
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 8:06 PM
Well what a beautiful tribute Tanka to a beautiful lady ..your lovely subject ..Ms. Carolyn.. absolutely all husbands need to take a lesson from u Charles.. good luck in Rick's contest my friend..with luv..
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