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Carolina Summers

How sweet the honey suckled air, long summer days without a care, (our childhood feet were always bare), spent playing in the hot sun's glare. On summer nights we played 'til dark, in fields among the meadowlarks, to us, it was a real ball park, we left there sweaty, faces marked. Through darkness lit with fireflies, (like walking home through star-filled skies), our sleep was deep, life simplified, lulled by cricket's lullabies. Carolina's endless summers, filled with play and guiltless slumbers, children free and unencumbered, unaware our days were numbered. ©Danielle White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/17/2009 10:39:00 AM
this is wonderful, takes me back to my summers..congratulations.
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Date: 6/16/2009 3:04:00 AM
Congrats on your succes in Debbie's contest Danielle.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/15/2009 8:22:00 PM
A lovely poem about childhood. If they could only last longer. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 6/15/2009 7:45:00 PM
What a peaceful feeling this poem gives the reader....happy summer nights, from a child's point of view. Loved this!! Congratulations on placing in the contest, Danielle!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 6/13/2009 6:48:00 AM
Loved it...especially "Carolina's endless summers,filled with play and guiltlessslumbers, children free and unencumbered"...it would be an even brighter GEM is you worked to have the rest of the cadence match these lines. PS if you haven't entered..it's a good contest entry for Beautiful Baby..Light & Love Always
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Date: 6/12/2009 6:21:00 PM
Smile~"You Are Truly A Wondereful Poetess Danielle White!!!":):)~I love Your mastery of rhyme!! And Your stories are always so depthful and fascinating!! Take for instance Your ending here~From a beautiful pleasant journey; to the awareness of how the world and life, will sooner or later, for most, steal a great part of it away!!?~"Beautifully Excellent Write"~"My Love & Warmth Always To You & Your Loves, John!!":):) Goodnight ~
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Date: 6/12/2009 6:09:00 PM
What a terrific poem...I love the last line..I love it all. i feel that way sometimes about my youth... BG
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