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Carnival In Our Blood Cells

Come closer close enough to touch to breathe you, carnival in blood cells of you and me let them sing and dance. Festive night, wild drum beats calling stop the clock let us drink drink of love like golden bliss slowly sip by sip. © kashinath karmakar(16th August 2011) ===============000============== Placement: 4th; (August 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Contest:Share the Shadorma Sponsor:Nette Onclaud

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John Freeman

Date: 8/23/2011 9:56:00 PM

Quite the contrast Kashinath. Congrats on a worthy presentation. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/23/2011 8:26:00 PM

ahhh a romantic view! very dreamy...congrad's light & love

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/23/2011 6:47:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest, a very different approach to the theme, very sensual, I enjoyed this a lot :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2011 4:15:00 PM

I forgot how good this one is. I'd have put it higher!! congrats!

Jack Horne

Date: 8/23/2011 12:15:00 PM

I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 8/23/2011 11:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement in nette's Shadorma contest. When you say drums, I think dancers move to the beat...lol Great job! Caryl Ramsdale

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/23/2011 10:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Share A Shadorma" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2011 9:15:00 AM

Congrats Kash on your 4th place win with these elegant lines on carnival my friend.. enjoy from Florida luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/23/2011 9:04:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,kashinath

David Williams

Date: 8/23/2011 4:01:00 AM

hey kash, congrats on your great win.. David

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 8/22/2011 10:59:00 PM

Kash, can I call you Kash? This one is wonderful! Sensous and very 'real'. I especially liked your repetition of the word, 'drink', I would have resisted doing this, but I see you do it and think not only, "Hey, that works" but "Hey that ROCKS!" Congrats on the win. Thanks for your comments on my works... I so enjoyed this read!

Johnny Sumler

Date: 8/17/2011 4:02:00 PM

Speaking of a wonderful approach, this one is unique with poetic creativity and grace apart from all the other lovely entries to this contest. Truly an amazing write! Simply loved reading!

Jack Horne

Date: 8/17/2011 10:58:00 AM

Very witty write, Kash

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/17/2011 8:06:00 AM

Whoah Kash. Unique and scientific twist. Nette shall appreciate this entry. Hope your day is startin off great, Bengali. :) Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/17/2011 6:09:00 AM

come visit.. miss ya! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2011 12:17:00 AM

wow, I think yours rocks, KAsh!! one of the best. I sure hope nette thinks so too!!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/16/2011 9:14:00 PM

Sound like a Carribean carnival Kash, the lights and color are all painted so vividly. Great write! Love, Lizzie

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/16/2011 8:15:00 PM

Unusual take on the subject..good luck, ..thanks for your comments, jag

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/16/2011 7:20:00 PM

stop the clock.. I am for that Kash.. enjoy carnival forever.. good writing my friend.. good luck in the contest.. thankxx for your comment on Gypsy Curse.. u caught the underlying meaning of the wolf and luv parallel.. appreciate ..luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/16/2011 5:09:00 PM

whooh, thanks for joining, kashi.. will take a long look at this come judging time... oh, come visit.. :) huggs, nette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/16/2011 4:50:00 PM

Very romantic work from the theme..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by with well wishes..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/16/2011 4:33:00 PM

Oh, Nette will love the passion in this poem just as much as I do, Kash. I can almost hear the "wild drum beats calling." Awesome! Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

David Williams

Date: 8/16/2011 11:49:00 AM

hey Kash, different take but i like it, thanks for the advice on my poem, David

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/16/2011 11:16:00 AM

Well, this sure is a different kind of carnival, very unique title btw ;) and haha, thanks for the offer but will just join contests here and there---I think I am lying low here for a bit (or will try!!) ;) see you around and wish you the best in the contests!

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/16/2011 8:44:00 AM

Well Kash, diverse is good, it works well with this write of yours.. Wishing you all the best for Nette's contest ;) W