Carnival

Together we sway
to the rhythm. Coconuts
squash the romance quick.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 9:37 PM
I like the image of those squashing coconuts!!
Paxman Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 5:57 AM
:)
Rhinem Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 5:55 PM
Smile ˜ Sounds As Though Perhaps A Storm Arrived To Damp Joyfuls Moment, My Dear Beautiful Lady * Smile, Hurryyyyyyyyy, Run For Shelter ) ˜ My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜
Paxman Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 5:57 AM
:)
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May 12, 2012 at 5:56 PM
Ps. Smile ˜ "Owww, & I Love Carnivals, Too!" *
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