Carnival

CARNIVAL Masquerade Passing parade Behind the faces – What? Dizzied bright Synthetic light Synthetic everything! Robotics The mystery What you see? Now! Straight forward You hip! You hip! You left right left! Words can kill Silence is telling Behind the faces- What? Which one? Which one has murdered someone? Which unknown has been reborn ‘neath a star? Masquerade. Hundreds on parade Carnival!

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Joe Maverick

Date: 4/28/2011 5:10:00 PM

Enjoyed this intruiging write Daver, (making it alive)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2011 3:36:00 PM

daver,I am sorry to learn about the cataracts. I hope you get it taken care of promptly and without any complications. You take care now. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2011 11:07:00 AM

Your poem reads like Stephen King's concept of a carnival, Daver. Awesome and very intriguing. Hope your surgery goes well. Please let me know when you can. Love and blessings on their way to you, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/25/2011 12:12:00 AM

enthralling visual play, daver.. is this for a contest?? :) hugggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2011 3:30:00 PM

Yes, much mystery behind those masks. Have you been to Mardi Gras, DAver? I would love to go there! This one much different from your poems longing for spring! well, I am needing to go upstairs now and fix dinner!! Happy Easter,DAVer.

Kyle Carlson

Date: 4/24/2011 8:19:00 AM

Interesting very interesting I like this.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2011 8:09:00 AM

Way to go , Daver... this makes me think... but I'm just a silly clown with no one to follow... I like the flow and march in your poem... also stopping by to wish you a happy Easter.. enjoy your Sunday ... not in silence.. lol... than you'll be just like a robot... hip hip!... take care..p.d.