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Carlos

My child asked me today, what a poem was and I told him. Perhaps, in a state of happiness for his interest in such an important art form, I betrayed thousands of years of verse, and killed so many poets. So I went searching and found it all too confusing. Why, I ask, does the poet make his verses so impenetrable, why does he make it so elusive? I felt sad and small, that my child waited, while ignorance wrapped me tight, like a heavy visible cloak. And I did what others do when they don’t know: I told him of how busy I was. My child became a teenager: resilient, smart and unable to allow a parent a safe retreat anywhere. When he met a poet, he called me at once: a poem, Carlos told him, is nothing but a beautiful box, with life inside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/14/2016 1:32:00 PM
marco aurelio, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:50:00 PM
Marco, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 12/6/2013 1:42:00 PM
- A child need not "deep" answer ..... but we must give us time to respond so that they understand. - A poem for thought, Marco - well done! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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