Carlos

My child asked me today,
what a poem was
and I told him.

Perhaps,
in a state of happiness
for his interest
in such an important art form,
I betrayed thousands of years of verse,
and killed so many poets.

So I went searching
and found it all too confusing.
Why, I ask, does the poet
make his verses so impenetrable,
why does he make it so elusive?

I felt sad and small,
that my child waited,
while ignorance wrapped me tight,
like a heavy visible cloak.
And I did what others do
when they don’t know:
I told him of how busy I was.

My child became a teenager:
resilient, smart and unable
to allow a parent
a safe retreat anywhere.


When he met a poet,
he called me at once:
a poem, Carlos told him,
is nothing but a beautiful box,
with life inside.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 12:29 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 14, 2016 at 1:32 PM
marco aurelio, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 1:50 PM
Marco, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
Andresen Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 1:42 PM
- A child need not "deep" answer ..... but we must give us time to respond so that they understand. - A poem for thought, Marco - well done! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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