Caring and the Job

Caring and The Job

The caretaker got out of the car. 
She went to the back, 
opened the door, 
and pulled her ward out too. 
He was an old man. 
He was a frail man. 
He was a frail, old man. 

Together, they turned. 
They slowly walked 
toward the entrance, 
of the doctor's offices. 

A few steps forward, 
then they stopped. 
A few steps forward
then they stopped, again.
The man had lost his pants. 
They had slid clear to ankles... 
at a glance. 
Everyone could see, 
what the man was wearing, 
staring at white diapers
for the old.
It was cold. 

Passersby just passing. 
No one stopped to help. 
He just stood there, 
standing in the wind... 
of the blustery day. 

The helper seemed slow
and unconcerned. 
As if this was an everyday
occurrence. 
My heart was broken
for this stranger, 
that had been reduced
to so much less, 
than he truly was or is, 
by time, 
by injustice, 
by failing health, 
lack of wealth, 
and most of all
by the stealth 
of death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 10/21/2022 2:14:00 PM
Your poem probes the heart. What a metaphor for life.
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Date: 8/15/2022 8:22:00 AM
Painful to read of the truth for so many older people today in an unloving society. Thanks for thei thought-provoking poem Ann. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 8/5/2022 8:26:00 AM
For me dear Ann this is your very best poem .All of your poems are wonderful to read but the humanity, the sympathy, the uncaring attitude of the caregiver and passers by, the obvious lack of money, his embarrassing display of his pants dropping, no wealth, and the stealth of him not letting go for eternal peace - this poem made me very sad but this deserves all the accolades you could possibly be given - kudos my friend, keep well and safe. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/5/2022 2:29:00 AM
Oh, I was moved by your beautiful heartfelt write my dear friend Ann. So sad that good samaritans are few now adays. Your wonderful poem reminded me 1 incident while i was travelling by bus last week. A man at the back fainted but no one helped. Instead all eyes on him. I was a foreigner but my heart broke so I attempted to hold his hand until one male passenger helped. I enjoyed your poem my dear friend. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you. Hugs
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