Caressing White Clouds

White clouds caressing the deep blue

sky, cool breezes making me

feel like its spring time in heaven.


The scent of freshly cut grass,

knowing that summer is just

a stone throw away.


Sun peeking through tree tops

on this enchanting morning

warmth of sun making


me feel so alive and the

sweetness the air brings,

such a delight it gives me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 7/3/2011 2:47:00 PM
lovely visuals James and vibrant images flow with your lines of poetry ..thankxx for enjoying my contest entries..they are so fun and challenging to write..luv..happy 4th..
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:07:00 AM
Really like this one. I too appreciate the things that money can't buy. Thanks for stopping by to read for me again. I have nine grandchildren and they are all so special. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/13/2011 10:01:00 AM
James, I love the thought of caressing those clouds. Spring will soon give way to summer heat, so enjoy the "sweetness in the air" while you can. Get's awfully hot in Florida's summers. It's 93 degrees right now. Your peom made me feel "cool" and content! Thank you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:03:00 AM
YOu must have had a hard winter - know I did. I pick right up on this sweet piece. Love, daver
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Date: 6/10/2011 1:25:00 PM
Lovely write, James. Love the vivid imagery - I could almost smell that grass : ) Yes, as you say - love is more important than age!
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James Foulk
Date: 6/10/2011 5:50:00 PM
thank you for reading this and for your comment.
Date: 6/9/2011 3:29:00 AM
Nature is beautiful indeed,and so are your words!
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:20:00 PM
Very descriptive of a pleasant morning when the weather is just perfect..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..It is good to be alive when we can get outside and enjoy the beauty that we have been blessed with...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:45:00 AM
Caressing white clouds amidst azure blue skies, one doesn't want to look down, for the above gives us sighs. Lovely poetry James, smiles :) for this one
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