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Cards of Lies

Nothing stays the same, fragrant flowers fade, cloaked in shame, am I to take the blame? when rainbows abandon colors, twisting pristine purple into pale grey vapor. Masks eventually slip and cards of lies unfold~ reversed angels, orchestrating cruel charades.

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Shane Thacker

Date: 2/13/2024 6:10:00 PM

So good!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/12/2024 1:29:00 AM

Truly a sublime write, surreal almost, hypnotic, saying it as it feels, so artistically. Warmest congratulations on your win in Line’s contest, dear IE

Ink Empress
Date: 2/12/2024 2:23:00 AM

That means alot dear seeker thank you so very much

Karen Jones

Date: 2/11/2024 9:30:00 PM

Very creative and beautiful. Congratulations on a win.

Ink Empress
Date: 2/12/2024 2:23:00 AM

Thank you always for being so kind

Robert Sidwell

Date: 2/11/2024 12:35:00 PM

Every word is utilized is this short poem to pack a powerful punch. An excellent example of not using fancy words just to fit them into a poem for the fun of it. I’d like to see AI try to come up with anything half as clever as that!

Ink Empress
Date: 2/12/2024 2:22:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations and heartfelt feedback, i use fancy words, but theres always emotions behind my poems, and AI — i have a poem on my page too against ai, “ poetic predator “ pls do have a look when you can. Appreciate your feedback

Paige Hind

Date: 1/31/2024 1:06:00 PM

Deep dear SAGE. Loved this. A FAV!

Mat Ignacio

Date: 1/27/2024 9:31:00 PM

powerful and illuminating - love that forth line too

Valsa George

Date: 1/27/2024 8:55:00 PM

A poem fraught with the pain of betrayal... The question- "Am I to take the blame" comes down as an arrow piercing! In a few lines you have exposed the torment of a heart cruelly cheated with a pack of lies and a false appearance as an angel while being a demon !

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/27/2024 2:59:00 PM

The pain of awful betrayal is so beautifully expressed in your mesmerizing images, Ink. A brilliant work. Blessings.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/27/2024 10:46:00 AM

Dear Empress, soulful poetess, your poem is expressive and impressive with dramatic and dynamic imagery and metaphors. Your golden pen spills poetic brilliance with verse like "am I to take the blame?/when rainbows abandon colors" Your thought-provoking artistry and creative phrases convey the exquisite pain and deep rich sadness of betrayal "Masks eventually slip and cards of lies unfold". Your last line with "reversed angels" is telling and a vivid finale to a poignant piece. Warmest wishes my sweet friend.. I hope your heart is in one piece.. ~Susan

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 1/27/2024 7:03:00 AM

This is so eloquently written enjoyed reading your work.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/27/2024 5:33:00 AM

when rainbows abandon colors--when that happens something has gone terribly wrong! Emotive write, Ink--it is true, nothing says the same. Your poem--an invitation to pause and think.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/26/2024 8:36:00 PM

A little scary at the end, but the disloyal angels really summed it up. I appreciate your poem for its honesty and warnings.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/26/2024 3:27:00 PM

dearest Ink--this was such a soulful poem. I agree, nothing stays the same. Betrayal changes every thing...for me, betrayal is a huge, disappointing lie. I've known some 'fallen angels in my time--friends, colleagues, even in-laws, etc. Hard reality to accept at times. Initially I feel crushed but have developed a bit of a tough skin saying 'that's them, not me...don't blame me.' (hope I'm making sense.) Have a pleasant weekend ahead, hugs, Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/26/2024 1:48:00 PM

Interesting perspective. For me the written salutation tells the story. I’m not much of a Hallmark kinda guy. When it comes to cards I prefer a deck of 52. ;0)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2024 1:28:00 PM

For sure, if someone is lying it will be found out if we are willing to find out. I agree change is coming if we hang around long enough. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 1/26/2024 11:58:00 AM

Interesting poem dear poet... are broken promises regarded as lies? You are right nothing stays the same, except for the sun and moon, you wrote a deep short verse here, which seems to have a personal hidden meaning for you..is a reversed angel a demon? Apparently the devil was an angel first... interesting thoughts dear poet..

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 12:36:00 PM

Yes unfortunately sometimes, ones i think were angels turn out to be fallen angels. Lol this comes from a place of betrayal. And sadness: thnk you for your visit sweet silent one. Appreciate you always: sending you light today and always

Deb M

Date: 1/26/2024 10:56:00 AM

Beautifully said Sweet Ink….”Be Mindful”!! and stay away from those negative , toxic people …..don't let your disappointment in others and their dishonest behaviour consume you….easier said than done l know.! There are many good authentic souls in this world…hold on to that thought when you're feeling disillusioned or hurt…..been there done that! Oops…. l hope this doesn't sound like a lecture ….l just relate to your words! Debx

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 12:38:00 PM

Ah dear debx, wow you actually felt my words and the underlying depth of pain that flows: this is written from a place of sadness as i taste betrayal. And worst kind of betrayal comes not from those that you think may be against you, but those that you trust with your eyes closed and consider as angels. Sad reality: i intend to do better and not trust so much anymore I appreciate you reminding me this. Thank you so very much

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/26/2024 10:24:00 AM

Your poem exhibits exceptional talents, skillfully conveying a profound message. Dear Ink enthrallingly delves into the themes of transformation and deceit. The adept utilization of evocative language constructs a captivatingly captivating and poignant storyline. Truly, it masterfully captures the fleeting essence of existence and the intricate facades we adorn.

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 12:39:00 PM

Always grateful for your in-depth analysis. Thank you so very much truly dr sotto

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/26/2024 10:06:00 AM

Masks must slip…lies come out and lies create their own prison. Best to be genuine, honest, forthcoming…then you can breathe. …rainbows abandon color, purple into pale gray vapor… I’ve noticed when we are very mad or down, we don’t see color so if I am I purpose to see, to turn things around! Hugs ~ Kim

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 12:40:00 PM

Thats a very deep observation dear kim, so true and wise words, truth always prevails and lies confine us and best policy is honesty often. Thank you so much truly

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/26/2024 9:10:00 AM

Dear Ink Empress, It is such an intriguing exploration of change and deception. Excellent use of emotive language that creates a hauntingly beautiful narrative. Oh, the transient nature of life and the masks we wear. Beautifully penned! - Blessings, Daniel

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 12:41:00 PM

Thank you daniel for always supporting us all on soup here with your sincere and generous comments and analysis of our poems, i am truly grateful for everytime you leave your feedback, i can tell you are not just a brilliant poet, but a deep and soulful reader. Thankful

Joseph May

Date: 1/26/2024 9:04:00 AM

A deep write Empress, they say "the more things change the more they remain the same"

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 12:41:00 PM

Thank you so very much dear joseph. Ans how true i think so too despite changes somethings remain the same ..

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 1/26/2024 8:58:00 AM

Nothing stays the same, Oooo that opening line!!! fragrant flowers fade, .. come thru alliteration!!!! am I to take the blame?… no noooo we shall find someone to blame ae!!! Let the kundhalini awaken!! She will know who to blame!!! rainbows abandon colors, Like my soul have abandoned me aee!! orchestrating cruel charades… aeeee I am aware of this orchestrations aee!! U sit n orchestrate such kundhalini storms!!! Tsk … but all jokes aside.. this piece flows like melted butter … gorgeous piece!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 12:43:00 PM

Hahahah papi who should we blame tonight? Ill blame the stars! Lol

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 12:43:00 PM

Ps kundalini needs chocolates late night!!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/26/2024 8:51:00 AM

Your "Cards Of Lies" is a powerful write. Few words with much said. I do not need family or friends that lie. Life is too short. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 12:44:00 PM

Wise words sweet paula, i appreciate your support truly always

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 1/26/2024 8:49:00 AM

Sadly nothing stays the same . True .

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 12:44:00 PM

But somethings remain . I hope thank you dahlin