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Cardiac Distress

my cardio-myopathy has now become deformed they say its hyper-trophic and obstructive to my flow there's danger in its nature, so say the minds of those who run my life and need my strife to buy their kids some clothes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/20/2015 9:05:00 PM
Not a true limerick in beat count, but I like it.
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Robert Johnson
Date: 8/21/2015 11:49:00 AM
look up limerick, it should tell ya.
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Mike Martin
Date: 8/21/2015 11:11:00 AM
Why thank you robert johnson. I was starting to think that no one ever says anything constructive around here. What is the proper beat count for a limerick?

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