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Caramel, In Velvet She

She seemed a bit shy sometimes but, deep inside Carved this image her truth; parthenos genesis, in fertile soil... Jezabel's gazing from afar envious these eyes, towards she ? Chosen a garden tilled to bear new fruit; love's awaiting her queen Resurrection time's promise once lost and she, the seed: bold their brush, golden.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2014 9:23:00 PM

Jeremy... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/13/2014 6:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jeremy

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/28/2014 9:32:00 AM

Poetry in velvet! Imagery dances and emotions flow. Well done Jeremy..my best, chuck

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/28/2014 9:29:00 AM

Jeremy, this is sweet. I like the formation, in the inside.. Adding *In fertile soil* was a clever move.... XOX ~Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/28/2014 9:24:00 AM

Hello Jeremy, I read the comment you left on my poem. The poem I re-posted was in memory of my grandson Bael. I know I will see him again one day. I'm glad you enjoyed what you read about my work. I'm a bit curious how you heard about me. I hope it came from the good poets from this site... xox~ Linda